Nitpicking Poems

Into the Sturm und Drang fueled maelstrom

...Into the Sturm und Drang fueled maelstrom

Otherwise titled – my poetic impressions of Helene

All la names bespeaking deity froom
Noah Mo' Room India Arc
of Covenant to crypt tick Blood
(swea...
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Categories: nitpicking, analogy, appreciation, beauty, crush,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Memberlousy head

...A nitpicking chief isn’t nice
Takes away work’s sugar and spice
Labor can chug
Without a boss bug
Since we’re not the ones who have lice...
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Categories: nitpicking, anti bullying, humor, mental
Form: Limerick


The Game

...I wish if I could understand your crazy game. It is driving the world insane. I which If I could understand this crazy game, from we made eye contact life is not the same. Thousands of sea gulls have...
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Categories: nitpicking, animal, business, career, community,
Form: Narrative

A Present To Myself

...I wallow in self-hate pitifully often
Nitpicking every single flaw I have 
But sometimes when I observe myself
From outside my body
I admire myself 
My sturdy vessel that is covered in scars
Ch...
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Categories: nitpicking, beautiful, beauty, confidence, dark,
Form: Free verse

Time To Disembark

...it is natural that this is
a time for memories
after all these years
aboard the planet
and having almost arrived
the time to disembark
so it's touching to remember
those sublime moments
an...
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Categories: nitpicking, age, feelings, memory,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberA Gift Forgotten

...We act.
Rationally or irrationally,
logically or at random,
often intuitively.
Wise is he who considers first
the consequences of his actions.
For we do fashion our destiny,
like it or not.  T...
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Categories: nitpicking, anxiety, conflict, emotions,
Form: Free verse

Working

...Working

Don’t like working 
‘Cause it’s really such a bore.
Don’t like meeting deadlines,
‘Cause they’re really such a chore.
Don’t like attending meetings all day long,
Since you just sit an...
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Categories: nitpicking, humor, work,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberRant of the Day

...it’s exasperating and makes my stomach churn
there’s a brand new prejudice at every turn
looking at others out of the corner of our eye
all this nitpicking to try and find fault on the fly
this p...
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Categories: nitpicking, anger, conflict, judgement, people,
Form: Rhyme

Jasmines of Love

...Jeopardy of love's jasmines
Attitude threatens the petals 
Stable and sweet one moment
Miserable the next
Inner insecurities
Nitpicking on trivialities 
Ectacy of passion yet resets 
Smoothly ...
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Categories: nitpicking, art,
Form: Acrostic

Small Talk

...I woke up to the sound of the keyboard clicking
I went ahead and arose and I'm not nitpicking

It wasn't long after that a friend of mine called
I'm glad we have things such as phones installed
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Categories: nitpicking, friendship, perspective, poetry,
Form: Couplet

The Chess Game

...Who will make a move first.
The world of chess is in the courts.
Can we really give an appeal and pay our lawyer for trust.
It’s your move Bobby Fisher, I mean the judge. Which side are you on?
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Categories: nitpicking, care, christian, evil, games,
Form: Rhyme

Take It To the Limit

...Take it to the limit
If you must
Do a dance,
Show your stance,
Make a fuss.

Jump about
Scream and shout
Go ahead
Let it out...

Take it to the limit, if you must.

Hurry Up
We're await...
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Categories: nitpicking, people, words,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberBugs

...tweaking
and nitpicking
computer bugs...
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Categories: nitpicking, people,
Form: Haiku

Workshop Poem:Disaster

...Bad evils are flying in my stomach.
Inferno is burning out and reaching its  apex in my heart.
My nitpicking mind is calculating the pain of my innocent soul.
The devil is dancing on my head and m...
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Categories: nitpicking, anger, confusion, depression, identity,
Form: I do not know?

Workshop Poem:Disaster

...Bad evils are flying in my stomach.
Inferno is burning out and reaching its  apex in my heart.
My nitpicking mind is calculating the pain of my innocent soul.
The devil is dancing on my head and m...
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Categories: nitpicking, anger, confusion, depression, identity,
Form: I do not know?

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