Short Nitpicking Poems

tweaking
and nitpicking
computer bugs...

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A nitpicking chief isn’t nice
Takes away work’s sugar and spice
Labor can chug
Without a boss bug
Since we’re not the ones who have lice...

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Jeopardy of love's jasmines
Attitude threatens the petals 
Stable and sweet one moment
Miserable the next
Inner insecurities
Nitpicking on trivialities 
Ectacy of passion yet resets 
Smoothly falling in amorous lap.....

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Take it to the limit
If you must
Do a dance,
Show your stance,
Make a fuss.

Jump about
Scream and shout
Go ahead
Let it out...

Take it to the limit, if you must.

Hurry Up
We're awaiting the show
Tell us all
What we need to know
Time's a ticking...
Don't stop kicking or
Nitpicking.

Anyhow..

Gotta go... 
Enjoyed the show,
Take a bow....

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Who will make a move first.
The world of chess is in the courts.
Can we really give an appeal and pay our lawyer for trust.
It’s your move Bobby Fisher, I mean the judge. Which side are you on?
Nitpicking the evidence but he won’t budge. Now we take it up to the president for rights deserve. 
Mr. President can you help the lower class people? Taking it to the Supreme Court which is now reserved. It’s now your move......

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I wallow in self-hate pitifully often
Nitpicking every single flaw I have 
But sometimes when I observe myself
From outside my body
I admire myself 
My sturdy vessel that is covered in scars
Child birthing hips
Capable of recreation
Eyes filled with golden nectar
A heart that is home to many 
I’m a creation of God 
I’m precious for being born
Others might think this is not self-love
You fools do not understand that this is
The epitome of self-love—...

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