Jasmines of Love

Jeopardy of love's jasmines
Attitude threatens the petals 
Stable and sweet one moment
Miserable the next
Inner insecurities
Nitpicking on trivialities 
Ectacy of passion yet resets 
Smoothly falling in amorous lap..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/30/2023 10:19:00 PM
Very well Painted S.Zaynab
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Date: 2/23/2022 1:38:00 PM
Your words are so true. Such a powerful problem. Each word carries so much meaning.. Great poem!
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Date: 10/31/2021 6:14:00 PM
Very nicely penned zaynab :) Linda
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Date: 6/1/2021 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations. It's a lovely poem ~ Mala
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Date: 5/23/2021 11:39:00 AM
Your lines speak of small issues that become enormous. Clever in an acrostic. Each of them, can become a deal breaker. Good write.
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