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Premium Member Revolve

There's an endless cycle of living,
Where it's not always good or all bad.
It's constantly circling around taking and giving,
Seemingly lost, like a chaotic nomad.

While surviving along the two-dimensional plane,
Appearing to obediently follow only that of time.
One can only search about aimlessly,
For some reason to an obtuse rhyme.

However blind, there is a direction, that
Leads to an unforgiving cause and effect.
When the sums may become insurmountable,
No matter the levels of disrespect.

Yet beyond this flat, geometric reasoning,
Alternatives are seen, not from a circle, but a sphere.
As a multitude of tangents take new form,
Bringing new hope, along with old fear.

This revolution seeks to close its own circle,
Though its path will be curvilinear in its quest.
Since its journey may evolve with new experience,
Allowing for growth in the universal test.

We Revolve Around Something

circling and sensing
a center not ourselves
we revolve around something
encompassing
relationships, causes
hunger, need 
larger in cognizance of scale 
and belonging
than my private universe

Premium Member The World Does Not Revolve Around Them

What makes me mad with total frustration
are people who think they're superior.
Graciously I deal with aggravation.
No one can make me feel inferior.

What happened to old-fashioned chivalry.
Politeness costs nothing and gains everything.
Rude manners take a bite delivery
a hunting, grinding and mincing back swing.

Strikingly polite people, external suns,
how great their perceived status, someone who,
cordial smile, act as if they are the ones
honored by the introduction, not you.

I will not tolerate a rude banshee
allowing them to run all over me.

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How Does the Moon Revolve

he reminded me of a tree
feet rooted in the soil
his gaze surveying distant hills
that strained towards the sky

she lived inside the house
inside her head
travelled instead in a chariot
made from dreams

sometimes he brought her gifts 
a bundle of beans
a strawberry on a plate
she would wait alone in her head 
as she gazed at the dead summer fire

at times like this she could pull herself
back to the front
confront his world
eat his offerings knowing that
his mind was on lower things

trapped in the vortex of their worlds
a mutual gravitational pull
each proving gravity wins every time
over give and take

after the funeral 
she dragged her chair 
into the garden with the weeds
sitting alone and sipping her tea 
crosswords abandoned on her knee
 
she hasn’t much to say these days
her eyes gaze outwards now and yet
i notice that her chair is set 
back towards the house

the question is
how does the moon revolve
after the world is gone

Premium Member As My Daily Meals Revolve

I like a healthy breakfast.
Green smoothie or toast?
Any doubt?

I choose where to eat my lunch.
Which do I like most?
In or out?

I fix my hubby dinner.
Casserole or roast?
Which to tout?



For Dr. Ram Mehta's QUINZAINE CONTEST Poetry Contest

Revolve

Revolve land O Revolve 
Here I am.. 
In revolving, claps my wings strongly 
I am who fearful, mortal.. 
That wear the sea slippers and the
Ah, fate and death, 
I am the spirit that abandoned ports and
Absent where absent. 
... 
Revolve Land O Revolve 
Here where the love and dream follow us. 
What's precious love when the death is habitat! 
What's precious dream when certainty hurts!


Resolved To Revolve

now allow me to get these infintile rules straight, i cannot use profanity, but may I  
at least employ the word "profanity?"
             RESOLVED TO REVOLVE
Constantly 
Consistently
Caustically
Persistently
Yet I resist with resolve
As the world revolves
I’ll constantly be plagued by sorrow
I’ll consistently be afraid of tomorrow
Caustically and casually comes you, a casualty
Then I begin to persistently beg for neutrality
And remain fortified by resolve and a resolution
But here and now I declare this a revolution
It’s just two stagnant people standing  still as the world revolves
And we’ve got worldwide problems no one ever solves
So if you are constantly, consistently and caustically going to harass me with 
persistency
I’d say that my disdain for the likes of you is only in its infancy
And it shall grow likewise as does a field of wicked weeds
So with a bow I leave you now because you have too many f***** needs
And I’ll write you persistently to inform you of where the virgin road leads
   © 2011.…..Phreepoetree ~free cee!~

Resolved To Revolve

RESOLVED TO REVOLVE

Constantly 
Consistently
Caustically
Persistently
Yet I resist with resolve
As the world revolves
I’ll constantly be plagued by sorrow
I’ll consistently be afraid of tomorrow
Caustically and casually comes you, a casualty
The I begin to persistently beg for neutrality
And remain fortified by resolve a resolution
But here and now I declare this a revolution
It’s just two stagnant people standing  still as the world revolves
And we’ve got worldwide problems only mediation is able to solve
So if you are constantly, consistently and caustically going to harass me with 
persistency
I’d say that my disdain for the likes of you is only in its infancy
And it shall grow likewise as does those wicked weeds
So with a bow I leave you now because you have too many f***** needs
And I’ll write you consistently, constantly and persistently to inform you of where 
the virgin road leads
   © 2011.…..Phreepoetree ~free cee!~

Revolve One of Us

Hard work in every assembly line
Innovation as thought makes the difference
Judges balance variances in dispose of new substance 
As many credits as given yet many needs to repair

What happened on the way and why we are here
Freezing cold and sleepless nights from evolving dreams
Rejoices tender as gather searching in another well being
Swings future fire on the sky rebuild its pieces  revolve one us

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