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* for maximum effect cue audio at stanza break "For as they were in those days before the flood... so the presence of the Son of man will be." - Matthew 24:38-40 I see them, though they cannot see me. I watch as they engage in their hedonistic desires, indulging in licentious lust as they pursue gratuitous greed and perverted passion without restraint. Their skulls are hollowed-out turnips, their tongues cast poison darts. Their throats are an open grave as they spew slanderous lies and hold my people in contempt. Their blasphemies against the Spirit will never be forgiven, not in this world nor in the one to come. Each has a heart as calloused as a smith's hands, while their souls are blacker than dark matter. Enjoy the revelry my fiendish foes, at least until the clock strikes the midnight hour. For you see, I am near at the door. You don't know me, but I have many names. I am Abaddon, the Destroyer. I am Apollyon, the Ancient One. There is a judgment pending, the sound of which will tingle all ears and turn faces red with sweet wine into whitewashed gravestones. Listen, listen. Can you hear it? (gong) (gong) (gong) (gong) (gong) (gong) (gong) (gong) (gong) (gong) (gong) (gong) AND NOW, LET THE FINAL DANSE MACABRE BEGIN! play a mournful dirge sing a song of surrender for His day has come "Amen! Come, Lord Jesus." - Revelation 22:20 * A companion to my POTD Apocalypse Now

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Date: 12/5/2023 3:57:00 AM
Good Morning Tom. Hi. Wow, this is extraordinary powerful vivid and any other adjective of your choosing. You give us readers what I call the total package with your complete execution. Truly. It was a privilege turning to your page and this particular entry. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent because it is evident here. Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always. (smile) Yes we hear...
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/5/2023 6:20:00 AM
I've done a number of apocalyptic pieces. May repost some day. Thx for support Lisa
Date: 11/26/2023 8:48:00 PM
WOW, outstanding poetry, my friend, the repetition of "gong" was wonderful for emphasis. You are a wonderful poet and your Haibuns are always excellent. Thanks for sharing the message, some will listen that have never heard. I ready when He is. Have a pleasant week. Bill
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/27/2023 5:47:00 AM
Thx for kind praise Bill
Date: 11/25/2023 4:18:00 PM
This gripping poem is a fine companion to your POTD winner, which I also loved, Tom. Great writing!
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Date: 11/25/2023 4:40:00 PM
The Biblical message of judgment is timely and transcends my effort Thx Evelyn
Date: 11/24/2023 1:27:00 AM
A reminder and a warning in a most impressive, striking piece of writing, Tommy. Soon, or maybe not so soon, we'll be facing the music. ~ Regards // paul
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/24/2023 4:57:00 AM
I believe all the signs are there. Thx for visit Paul
Date: 11/22/2023 4:22:00 PM
A very deep and powerful write. Yes, the day will come. Many blessings Tommy
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Date: 11/22/2023 4:27:00 PM
Sooner rather than later. Then... Paradise
Date: 11/21/2023 2:20:00 PM
Ton, this is quite dramatic and powerful. Being a ninny, a lout, a liar, a taker of human, life…..calls for a solution, Any participating or marching for genocide is not free speech. Thank you for blessing us with your Viiion. Excellent, my man! Pangie xxxx
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Date: 11/21/2023 4:23:00 PM
Achtung and ach du Lieber!
Date: 11/21/2023 1:42:00 PM
Thrilling, wow you put a chill down my spine. The audio I did listen as I read and this is nothing less than a masterpiece. Put in place the last dance ever so cleverly, I shall fave. Macabre fer sure fer sure! You made me a believer all over again..and for those who don't...Jesus said "Not To Give Your Pearls To Swine--The Bible:)
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Date: 11/21/2023 1:45:00 PM
Fosho fosho. Thx dear Anaya
Date: 11/20/2023 9:01:00 PM
A great foreboding and alert! Yes, He will come. We do not when. You have powerfully conveyed man's state of sin and what awaits us .
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Date: 11/21/2023 5:39:00 AM
Much thx for comment Valsa
Date: 11/20/2023 2:35:00 PM
well i would ask you to dance but i'm hobbling on a fractured foot after a ladder fell on me, so i'll have to sit this one out
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Date: 11/20/2023 2:49:00 PM
Ahh, 'tis a merely flesh wound me love...
Date: 11/20/2023 2:18:00 PM
A lot of gongs there... you tell a story very well..
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Date: 11/20/2023 2:49:00 PM
Gong. Thx. But this isn't a story, it's a warning. Accountability and judgment are pending...
Date: 11/20/2023 10:52:00 AM
Yes, He is coming again, we just don't know when. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 11/20/2023 10:57:00 AM
"At an hour that you do not think to be it..." Thx
Date: 11/20/2023 9:13:00 AM
A foreboding piece. “Every knee will bend.” The music was an effective accompaniment.
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Date: 11/20/2023 9:43:00 AM
Thx Rick. Big Ben also thanks you
Date: 11/20/2023 6:47:00 AM
Your words convey the folly of man and the ultimate judgment of the Lord so well, Tom. Written with drama, conviction…and descriptive Biblical imagery throughout…well done!
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/20/2023 7:30:00 AM
I thought you might be able to relate. Thx Laura
Date: 11/20/2023 6:26:00 AM
Impressive Haibun poem, Tom! Influential portrayal; I can discern the mood and purpose.
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Date: 11/20/2023 7:29:00 AM
Oh it's got a mood all right. Thx for visit
Date: 11/19/2023 7:06:00 PM
Need a license to lust? Like a "get out of Eden free" card? Surrender indeed. Waiting. :o/
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Date: 11/20/2023 7:29:00 AM
Just a little while longer...
Date: 11/19/2023 5:46:00 PM
Wow. This is powerful. There is an urgency and a warning within your careful word choice. Great job with a unique effective presentation.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/19/2023 6:19:00 PM
I'm all in for another wow. Muchos gracias Karen. Yes, the message far transcends the poet in this case
Date: 11/19/2023 5:41:00 PM
Wow. A very rich tapestry of verse, here. I like the fact that you sub premised Apollyon. The art work exquisite.
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Date: 11/19/2023 5:44:00 PM
Glad you stopped by Jude
Date: 11/19/2023 2:57:00 PM
Wow! Such an impressive Haibun poem, Tom! Indeed, judgment is pending. I love the metaphor of 'the final dance.' Well done, sir. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/19/2023 3:08:00 PM
Thx Sara. Hello to Bill
Date: 11/19/2023 1:05:00 PM
WOW! Powerful depiction, Tom-indeed I hear the sound and the message. Your Haibun resonates in the final dance--play a mournful dirge sing a song of surrender for His day has come---words of faith, a potent command!
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/19/2023 3:07:00 PM
Yessir and thx!

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