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Waves kissing tiny toes splashing, cooling. Ebbing and flowing on golden sands where children love to play. 07~16~16 Checked with how many syllables 1,2,3,4,5,4,3,2,1 Contest One Stanza Only sponsored by Broken Wings

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/6/2016 5:02:00 PM

The breeziness of your words is just delightful! The fact that this is a "one stanza only" poem is another credit to your incredible talent. It feels effortless, like a refreshing breeze. You truly are gifted and to combine waves with children is to give immense Joy to all who read this lovely piece! Thank you! blessings, lynn

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/23/2016 8:43:00 PM

Jan, I love the visual of waves kissing tiny toes! A delightful write! Blessings!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2016 3:11:00 PM

Many thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 7/20/2016 4:31:00 PM

You make waves with this delightful winning stanza, Jan! Congratulations:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2016 4:33:00 PM

Thanks Paul I was delighted to place well:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/20/2016 1:11:00 PM

Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2016 4:33:00 PM

Thanks BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/20/2016 6:43:00 AM

Well done Jan, congratulations...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2016 10:10:00 AM

Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/19/2016 11:53:00 PM

Congratulations for your win ....

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2016 10:10:00 AM

Thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Jesse Day

Date: 7/19/2016 10:09:00 PM

Nicely composed Ninette. Congratulations for your impressive 4th place win in the One Staza One-Only contest! Jesse

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2016 10:11:00 AM

Thanks so much Jesse:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 7/19/2016 3:47:00 PM

Jan, the best imagery here lady... congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2016 10:11:00 AM

Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Sharon Gulley

Date: 7/18/2016 1:25:00 PM

A beautiful One Stanza write, Jan. I can hear the ocean as I read. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2016 10:12:00 AM

Thanks Sharon:-) hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 7/17/2016 12:13:00 PM

This is so sweet!! Good luck in the contest, dear Jan!! :-) :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/17/2016 12:38:00 PM

thanks so much Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/16/2016 4:03:00 PM

I can see and hear those children laughing and playing on the beach in this wonderful poem. love phyl

Jan Allison
Date: 7/16/2016 5:05:00 PM

Thanks Phyllis:-) I am delighted with the comments I am getting for this simple poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/16/2016 3:57:00 PM

so soothing and utterly lovely, jan... it's raining here and you make me want to swim!..mail soon with huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/16/2016 3:59:00 PM

Thanks Nette I do hope Constance likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/16/2016 3:31:00 PM

I saw the beach and my daughter's glee in walking along picking up seashells back in early 90's.. Now that is the true purpose of poetry to convey to the reader, a message , a scene or a remembrance IMHO. SUPER 7 MY FRIEND...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/16/2016 3:33:00 PM

Robert your comment has made my day:-) thank you:-) hugs Jan xx