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When Lilacs Bloom

Mushrooms peak b'neath the moon, and rabbits charm'd by grass do swoon. Where tulip's petals once so strong, unite the fall'n, one last song. Once again the goslings wander, stray not far from nipping mother. The winds will howl in sheets of rain, grandma snug, wrapped in her shawl. Aside the fire, pen will bend, this poem on birchbark, ...peace the end. 05/26/13 © All Rights Reserved

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Gary Watkins

Date: 11/23/2013 11:24:00 PM

Very lyrical and beautifully written, but I was a bit confused by the line breaks. - Gary

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 10/26/2013 8:27:00 AM

I really enjoyed this piece, Jimbo. You have a cool and unique style and a masterful way with words; kudos! :)

Jay Loveless

Date: 8/16/2013 9:00:00 AM

Its a beautiful poem and my eyes can see it all. I hope she finds her rocking chair comfortable, and the fire not too warm.

April Gabriella

Date: 6/26/2013 2:12:00 AM

Amusing poem indeed! Great job!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/23/2013 2:19:00 PM

There is a warm sense of whimsy and charm with this one! Loved it, James !!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2013 7:40:00 AM

Excellent creation that you have penned..Thoroughly enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/9/2013 10:57:00 AM

Hey James, havent been on the Soup for a while; so it's a joy to read this enchanting write of yours ;) tc Wilma

James Horn

Date: 6/4/2013 9:16:00 AM

Congratulations on being in the top 100. My only 30 have a long way to go. How do you do it? jthorn5656@atmc.net

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2013 3:21:00 PM

a very interesting one from you. It's so enchanting!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/30/2013 11:02:00 AM

Dear James, thank you for visiting! Why on earth you want to trade the paradise you live with the hell of the city? Ha-ha! Certainly you have your valid reasons! I lived in Montreal, Canada, for about twenty years and understand the beauty of nature as you describe it in your beautiful poem and your gracious comment! God bless you my friend, I hope you will still be around!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/30/2013 8:51:00 AM

You slay me with your incredible words and poetic mood, jimo.. nice to be back and see how you've come a long way.. greeat stuff!..:) huggs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/26/2013 3:31:00 PM

Its a magical poem ..You created a cosy and beautiful picture in my mind-lovely as always.