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Upon a Bed of Petals

Beneath the cherry tree, a blossom quilt laid out Inviting, calling, each petal a beckoning finger Sun sprinkles through the leaves springs here, hear the shout Hand in hand two lovers stand and linger. Face to face fingers entwined, lips just start kissing Breaths held, hearts beating, now in unison Arms around, holding close not a heart beat missing As down to their knees they fall as one. The quilt of petals becomes their fantasy Entwined as one in perfumed heaven Wrapped in love their passions free Hopes rising like warming leaven Sharing breaths one body and one mind Fluttering petals float on the spring breeze A love story like this you will not find Passions unlocked as with golden keys. One heart, one body, one mind Together on a blanket of petals True lovers find themselves entwined As the perfumed petals on pale skins settle © 11/04/2013

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Date: 4/26/2014 6:27:00 AM
Hi Mike and thank you for stopping by I really appreciate your comment xx
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Date: 4/16/2013 1:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win Mandy~ A.O
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Date: 4/15/2013 9:18:00 PM
Mandy, congratulations with your beautiful poem. A very lovely winning poem in Gail's contest. take care * xox-PD
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Date: 4/15/2013 7:11:00 AM
Congrats Mandy...Its a beauty!
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Date: 4/14/2013 7:15:00 PM
So warmly sensual. I love it! J
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Date: 4/14/2013 1:21:00 PM
congrats Mandy, amazing poetry deserved winner just love this...
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Date: 4/14/2013 12:30:00 PM
well done Mandy, Seren
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest with your lovely words... Samia
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Date: 4/12/2013 6:14:00 AM
Mandy; This is so romantic. I love it. Thanks for sharing and have a beautiful day with many blessings. Lucilla
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Date: 4/12/2013 1:56:00 AM
A great inviting love narrative. l will read it again and again...
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/12/2013 2:03:00 AM
Thank you Ndaba, I appreciate that xx
Date: 4/12/2013 1:55:00 AM
A great inviting love narrative. l will read it again and again...
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Date: 4/12/2013 1:39:00 AM
both beautiful and romantic, Mandy the last stanza is truly wonderful as is the whole poem,, and as is the mind that created this,,
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Harry Horsman
Date: 4/12/2013 3:12:00 PM
yes i've often wonered about that!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/12/2013 2:03:00 AM
Thanks harry, good job you don't know all that goes on in my mind lol xx
Date: 4/11/2013 2:44:00 PM
awww, what a lovely romantic write, Mandy. Congrats on your wins : )
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/12/2013 2:02:00 AM
Hiya and thanks Jack, hope oyu are okay xx
Date: 4/11/2013 4:34:00 AM
Love entwined with spring what a glorious composition of nature! Romantic and inspiring a hymn to cupid! I am back! GG!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/11/2013 7:36:00 AM
hello Demetrios, nice to see you back and thanks for the comment xx

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