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Toddler Sky

-Toddler Sky-

Down where I sleep, 
You hold me, embrace my every way
The Marks up on my skin
You caress, taking away from the ugliness

Watching the simple breath, when I breathe
Breaking the ice, soothing my inner peace
A sweet spray across the paleness in my limbs
Holding the warmth, I've been loved throughout my life.
From picking up sticks to the walking stick
My loving dear I know you will always be there
A few wheel chairs, when broken bones mend
You know my every cure*
Walk with me across the hall
Through the oldness, and the boldness of every color in the sky
Thank you for taking me as I am
A light twinkle' every time I feel the colors of the rainbow drip
Now a newborn takes his form
In you I find the strength to stretch my arms and reach for every star

When happy moments fail, 
I embraced the colors I found in you
I make out every tree, and wonder why and how?
I close my eyes to imagine the fun of chasing fireflies
Tonight I'm keeping my prayers simple, cute, and innocent
I will count sheep and search for sweet lullaby dreams
Smiling like a 3 year old this very moment, 
You think I'm having "Baby Blues."
My loving dear, thanks for having patience,
Painting my way down a toddlers sky
Every time  "P M S" hits


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  1. Date: 4/18/2015 1:12:00 PM
    A captivating work! Julia, :)

  1. Date: 7/15/2014 9:55:00 AM
    SKAT Enjoy the intimacy and vulnerability in this poem and all of yours. Glenn

  1. Date: 7/7/2014 8:30:00 PM
    Wow very deep, heartfelt thanks for sharing :-)

  1. Date: 6/18/2014 3:37:00 PM
    Enjoyed the write Skat. Thanks for your comments on my poems. It has been not a great spring as I was down with a 2 month virus and we had 3 deaths in the family. It was a rough beginning of the year . I may have told you this already and if i have then you know. thanks. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/23/2014 9:17:00 AM
    wow,wonderful write Skat,love the journey

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 9:46:00 PM
    SKAT What a unique and interesting write. The imagery and descriptiveness is so real and vivid that it pulls the reader from beginning to end. Thank you for the lovely comment on my Moon Madness poem

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 10:49:00 AM
    Hi SKAT - Thank you for stopping by. The title of this poem caught my eye and just had to read. Was not disappointed! Unique and full of beautiful description. - Gail

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 9:26:00 AM
    Hello, my new Friend. I Enjoyed this writing !!!.Very Nice. Sure I will get to read them all. Thank you..

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 9:03:00 PM
    Nice descriptiveness again. Here is the link to my poem about Baldwin, Michigan:

  1. Date: 2/21/2014 1:57:00 AM
    Beautiful Skat... Well versed and flows perfectly... Verlena - Dark Sunshine

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 10:22:00 AM
    SImple images - great use of language.

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 7:53:00 PM
    This poem is very well expressed, SKAT, and so heartfelt. The imagery painted within these tender lines is just wonderful! I am so glad that you have found true love and happiness, because you deserve it!

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 10:10:00 AM
    Hi SKAT; Am going to devote most of my morning to reading poetry, and am pleased I chose this one to begin with. It is so poignant-then you "flip the script" in the last line, "Every time "P M S" hits" A truly delightful piece, Thanks so much for sharing. xoxoxoxo Robert

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 11:38:00 PM
    Wow!! This is fabulous. You are very creative, and I absolutely love your style!

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 8:16:00 AM
    My lovely friend, just I have enlisted as one of my fav. poem. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 5:14:00 AM
    Loved my trip through the clouds with you . Thanks so much . I have 5 sisters , All older than me . I learned how to recognise ''P.M.S. at a very young age . Not so sure I want to thank you for that memory. LOL

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 11:57:00 AM
    Wonderfully written! It was a tremendous write!

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 4:59:00 PM
    My heart buckled when I felt all the sincerity and gratitude in this amazingly original and childlike poem Skat. Childlike in its happiness to work with life for what it is, the dream you share with others. Too many beautiful and original lines to highlight, Fav. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 5:16:00 AM
    Your magic with words is simply spellbinding....this is an outstanding poem.

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 3:48:00 PM
    It is good to embrace your inner toddler. I enjoyed this a lot. You might enjoy my poem "Tethered to my Happy" also if you have a chance read my most recent poem "thought Police" thanks for sharing this wonderfully expressed piece, I enjoyed reading it.