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The Dilemma of Two Minds

The Dilemma of Two Minds One Flesh, One Spirit I’m tired, beaten down, worn My allegiance is torn I feel pain and sadness No room for gladness My thoughts are with the ever Insurmountable problem of lack When I focus on that I succumb to His attack And then I breathe Give me one moment to find your peace To know my torment you will ease To take capture every thought And know your word must be sought On the power of the scriptures I will stand With the realization that I battle no man Satan seeks to see who he can destroy But oh Father I will not let him capture my joy My mind will be set on things above And how to show your people love Minds are not born again So with the daily battle I must contend If I do not control my thoughts Satan will win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/12/2009 7:19:00 AM
This is such a great poem laurie!...so well written and what a timeless struggle that we all must deal with...luke
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Date: 1/19/2009 3:43:00 AM
Ah ! The need to " Focus " .... here is an old saying quoted by a punk rocker in the 70's " if you're not part of the solution; then you're part of the problem " ... really liked the intent in this poem Laurie. Thank you so much for your comment on Torn and Tattered Wings
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Date: 1/18/2009 11:05:00 PM
"Love & Blessings Always To You & All Of Those Whom You Love~ Forever, John!"~"Bye Precious Laurie Ginn!":)
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Date: 1/18/2009 11:01:00 PM
Smile~I sincerely love writes like these dear lady~written amid faith & truth~and stright from the depths of heart & soul!!!~"Hello Precious & Blessed & Gifted Laurie Ginn!!!"~Smile~what an honestly sincere write you penned here~filled with "Inspiration, guidence & light!!!"~Yes, everyday is anew, and we must pick up our cross and sta near unto "Christ," our shelter and deliverer from life and fleshes storms and temptations!!?~"I Love Your Faith!!!"....{Cont}
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Date: 1/18/2009 9:10:00 PM
This was amazing, such strong words of faith. I loved this wonderful write, thanks for your kind words on my poem I appreciate it :) Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 1/18/2009 5:46:00 PM
I know that's right. His job is to kill, steal, and destory. But thanks be to God that giveth us the victory.
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Date: 1/18/2009 1:31:00 AM
Wonderul faithful, spiritual rap, dear laurie. Love and peace, Lainie And thank you for your kind comments, they mean so much to me. Love and peace, Lainie
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Date: 1/17/2009 9:23:00 PM
Laurie, this was so beautiful and inspiring, it really touches my soul. I feel like I am battling Satan day in and day out, he is trying so hard to destroy all our lives and souls, but God came that we might have life and have it more abundantly. So we have to tell Satan to flee and give God all the praise. We have to lean on the lord for his strength and his mercy, he will set us free. I love this so much...Excellent poem *Love Tyesha
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Date: 1/17/2009 10:42:00 AM
This is what I need to tone my writing down.. A Professional poet-- your words have arrived and I'm taking you to my leader I enjoyed this piece thanks for sharing
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Date: 1/17/2009 10:14:00 AM
Well written poetry which really lets out the pain building up from the heart and soul. enjoyed reading it and thank for your warm and honest comments. have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/17/2009 8:38:00 AM
I'm hearing a lot of feeling in the the poetry this morning. How wonderful that each one can share, and support, and to know one is not alone in the struggle. Well written, Laurie. ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/17/2009 7:59:00 AM
This is wonderful, Laurie! This touches my heart and hits very close to home for me. I know that God wants us to support each other and through this we gain strength and knowledge. You have a beautiful soul and a big loving heart! (AN e-mail will be coming soon!) Awesome write! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/17/2009 7:18:00 AM
The concept of positive focus bringing harmony to discord I totally agree! PS I put an adult warning on the verse Laurie LOL wash out you brain with my God's Voice ..smooch ...all things can not always be rosie or balance would not exsist! Light & LOve Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/17/2009 6:15:00 AM
thanks for the comment on my poem rules-no it is not fiction it is true and in my writings these poems thur the years i have healed and hoping they will help others who have suffered the same abuse....this poem is great.....rhonda hero
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Date: 1/17/2009 6:07:00 AM
Laurie I think we are some what on the same wave lenghts today with our poems. I love the a lot. Great insight to the soul of the voice in the piece. Awesome work!
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