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Spring In the Sunshine Coast

Spring has come in the Sunshine Coast! Carried by the wings of Humming birds flying through the Pacific Flyway, flowing like a dash of fresh air Spring has come here to stay! Look, there in the shallow beaches, Great Blue Herons wait for the prey, their aquatic love for eelgrass keeps them waiting the whole day, Herrings,Soles are busy in hide and seek play, Spring has finally come here, come here to stay! The blue water of the Pacific shining with bright sun rays, heady fragrance of lilacs thrilling the air whole day, it must be Miss Kim,as Miss Canada is still far away; Spring has finally come here, come here to stay! **Miss Kim and Miss Canada are two varieties of lilac. =============================

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Date: 1/31/2012 2:10:00 PM
Ohhh geeez this should have been way higher, one of the very best I've seen from you! wow eelgrass! and all that LIFE! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/30/2012 9:24:00 PM
congrats Kash on a fabulous win for these superb words of Spring luv.. so looking forward to that Season..
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Date: 1/30/2012 5:37:00 PM
Congrats, Kash. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations! I enjoyed your poem, Kash. I'm in Noosa, so where are you on the Sunshine Coast? I assume you are in Qld.....Maureen
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Date: 1/30/2012 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in my "Spring" contest Kash. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2011 11:39:00 PM
yes, kashinath, on that one poem you asked me about, it was based on a picture. There was a guy who used to be active here and he did many haiku contests with pictures. I miss those. Don't know where he went. Good night now. 2 and a half hours. I am outta here. I said that half an hour ago, but this time I mean it!
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Date: 1/15/2011 3:29:00 AM
Well you definitely bring Spring across here, kashinath! I hope this scores high-- enjoyed the images you share here and what cute names for lilacs! Smiles as I read this :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 1/14/2011 1:10:00 PM
I wonder if we have a miss canada lilac here in Canada. I will have to look. A wonderful poem full of imagery. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/9/2011 3:26:00 PM
I've come back here to fav this one which was a most worthy contest entry!
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Date: 1/9/2011 6:16:00 AM
Very good piece. The repetition in last line of each stanza msakes ther poem very strong. Cleverly done. Middle verse very descriptive. Regards, Déirdre
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Date: 1/7/2011 6:39:00 PM
great work!! enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 1/7/2011 1:32:00 PM
Magnificent tribute to spring, Kashinath. You bring a breath of fresh air to Poetry Soup and I find myself becoming a big fan of your talent. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/7/2011 8:39:00 AM
what a clever write, especially that you let us know the meanings of miss kim and miss canada! I really like your spring entry and i hope it places high. One of my favs in this contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/7/2011 7:28:00 AM
Good one for the contest..Reads like a sure winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Your presence at my work brought delight to my soul..Sara
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Date: 1/6/2011 4:15:00 PM
Beautiful Kashinath.. appreciate the explanations on the types of lilacs at the end... must be lovely to view.. as your poem and entry was to read..luv.. good luck in the contest ..my friend... awesome expressions..
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Date: 1/6/2011 12:16:00 PM
This is beautiful Kashinath! Sounds like a beautiful place. I just love hummingbirds. Best wishes for a win in Francine's "Bring on Spring" Contest! And thanks for leaving comments on my poem! Always, Audrey
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Date: 1/6/2011 10:50:00 AM
Sunshine Coast is a region in British Columbia (B.C)
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