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Soul On Fire

Freedoms inferno ablaze in your eyes reflections of a soul on fire the composition of my existence My seventh and final child My work of art - in abstract theme for now abridged of what's to come courage that resides in your heart of a lion In my pride to know you as son As your journey begins your sailing ship I pray your winds not becalmed nor falter course - a compass fit for mighty winds as the depth of our bond When comes the day My heart has beat it's last forget no lesson nor moral I gave they will hold your course till you breathe your last In purest love without condition the uncounted cost of every day no greater gift than to be your mother for such wealth no money could pay My beautiful, beautiful boy I love you more than life time has no tolerance for a world in strife use life for the living - not just to survive What talent of artistry you own for with your laughter alone you paint my smile RADIANT - for you are my child (For my son who asked me to write him a poem Just in case I died. He wanted to know what I thought Would be most important to say to him should I speak no more)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/21/2014 8:40:00 AM
This so moved me as I read it again. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Date: 8/10/2014 7:52:00 PM
You have gifted your son with a true gem. I believe he will treasure this gift always. A superb write my friend!!! BBBBRAVOOOO!!!!
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Date: 3/28/2014 4:05:00 PM
Strong feelings which only a mother can transmit. And good advice to go with it as well. // paul
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Date: 3/28/2014 1:56:00 PM
This is indeed very beautiful. A mother's love is forever until the end. This is a memory that he will forever keep. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 3/28/2014 11:08:00 AM
Immortal words of worth coming from the depths of the most caring heart: The heart of an adoring mother! What a treasure!!!
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Date: 3/28/2014 7:37:00 AM
You dreamed him into existance and now the world is a more complete place. This poem is a gift I am sure he will always treasure. The fact that he asked for and you gave him this gift is no small thing. Thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs Rick.
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