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Reverberations

. Reverberations of roosters' crows through the hollow of opposing hills The cymbal section of nature's band Singing male Mockingbird such varied notes Answer by a female but her tune is always the same Noooooooooo!! He answers cu-----te, pur___ty, come Here~~er~er The same answer from her nooooooo!!! Another female flys up and lands on the fence nesting material in her mouth She was lured away by someone's call____ This foggy morn, nice, cool, a few minutes on the porch Then responsibility to complete today's work since I answered someone's call_____ Sponsor: Frank H Contest: Sounds May 09, 2013

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Date: 5/21/2013 9:27:00 AM
Oh I love this Sara....I can just see and hear it! Congratulations
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Date: 5/21/2013 1:28:00 AM
Many congratulations on another win Sara, well done xx
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:49:00 PM
Sara, Congratulations!! A nice winning poem... Linda
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Date: 5/20/2013 2:55:00 PM
Oh Sara, that is so so cute, so original, congratulations , love it. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 5/20/2013 12:30:00 PM
great write and win Sara...congrats
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Date: 5/20/2013 11:24:00 AM
Like a precious gem glittering in poetic words. Big congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/20/2013 11:13:00 AM
Sara your poem combines the harmonious of sight sound.. A grand poem. It reminds me back to my farm days in the country. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/11/2013 11:25:00 PM
A good reflective write here Sara on the way of things.. I notice you really enjoy the wildlife, I am concerned at the work situation where you live, Its so bad this depression..' I hope that the spirit of you and neighbors can rise above its influence take care Joe..)
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Date: 5/10/2013 4:25:00 AM
- A poem that warms my heart, Sara. - Well done!- Luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/10/2013 4:15:00 AM
Thank you for making time to listen to the noises of the day, and converting it into music for us with you splendid words. Have a blessed weekend, Sara. David
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Date: 5/9/2013 4:44:00 PM
Nature indeed has its own band. This is a lovely, poetic write, Sara. Good luck in Frank's contest with this strong entry. Well done. :-)
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Date: 5/9/2013 4:04:00 PM
Tremendous, a highly sophisticated sound system nature is! And you have described it so perfectly through some glorious birds, especially the mockingbird! I like how you ended this piece, with you being one that answered a call yourself! Very clever my friend, very clever! Great Work!!
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Date: 5/9/2013 2:50:00 PM
the call of nature love!!! Very nice, Sara.
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Date: 5/9/2013 1:41:00 PM
It left me with a smile! Naturally Beautiful! Fine verse! Life in the making! Thank you!
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:43:00 AM
Love this piece Sara.Can hear those birds calling today. love phyl
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Date: 5/9/2013 8:47:00 AM
great tonality in this piece, sara.. the sounds reverberate trhough your melodic tunes.. for frank, perhaps?.. greatt stuff.. :) huggs!
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