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Moon

Low hanging moon with softened gleam; As stars peek down, I take my rest. I lie beneath a sheen of cream. Low hanging moon with softened gleam, Your essence wraps around my dream, Then flees beyond your sleepy crest. Low hanging moon with softened gleam; As stars peek down, I take my rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/18/2014 10:06:00 PM
I like this one about the ominous moon..
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Date: 6/7/2013 3:16:00 PM
congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 6/7/2013 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/7/2013 5:49:00 AM
congrats on the win my friend, once again you have done a marvelous job tackling the form.. Take care cory
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Date: 6/6/2013 10:29:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight
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Date: 5/30/2013 7:09:00 PM
sheer beauty
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Date: 5/9/2013 7:38:00 AM
I really enjoyed this your piece on the moon. This poem simply can't escape one's notice.
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Date: 5/3/2013 2:33:00 PM
A sweet gem of a poem Andrea. love phyl
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Date: 4/27/2013 9:50:00 PM
Seldom been as disappointed when a poem finished. So short and sweet.-Red
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Date: 4/26/2013 6:40:00 AM
The beauty comes out in an enchanting form when a Moon starts singing for the other Moon. Great lines my friend. If it is for a contest my good wishes. I have placed a new Poem on 25th. Hope you would find it interesting. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:38:00 PM
Hey Andrea, dont know this form but I do know when I am touched by beauty and this poem certainly gives me a beautiful feeling. Great write, Thanks for stopping by my poems. : )
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Date: 4/23/2013 7:30:00 AM
Straight to my faves! This is simply a stunning piece. I have been so busy lately, but it has been such a treat to read your newest poems this morning. So thank you :)
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Date: 4/22/2013 4:53:00 PM
You certainly make me like a triolet. Fun, how it raps around itself. Sweet dreams. :)
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Date: 4/21/2013 10:08:00 AM
I'm moon struck Andera, or is it your poetry as usual?
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Date: 4/21/2013 9:18:00 AM
I have missed reading your lovely poems.
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Date: 4/21/2013 7:01:00 AM
What sweet words! And isn't it amazing to thnk men have walked on the orb! Nice rhyme too! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/21/2013 3:22:00 AM
Beautiful.Love this line very much-- Your essence wraps around my dream---good use of the triolet form here Andrea.
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Date: 4/21/2013 2:30:00 AM
another style I have not heard of,,,, I like it very much though ;}
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Date: 4/20/2013 5:07:00 PM
The ladies and the moon, what I admire most! Here a combination of the two. Double the happiness! Harmonious coexistence, as they are draped in fine expressions!
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Date: 4/20/2013 1:02:00 PM
Great poem Andrea, I really liked the line "as stars peek down, I take my rest.". Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Oh ya, I entered your contest. Have a great day.
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Date: 4/20/2013 9:17:00 AM
Don't you love the poetry of Sukmawati Komala? Her ideas are fresh and beautiful. This beautiful poem kinda reminds me of her stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 4/20/2013 8:25:00 AM
I honestly enjoyed this piece... Thanks for sharing~A.O
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Date: 4/20/2013 7:21:00 AM
And yes, I paint my face when I hunt to honor my Native American blood. Its tradition at this point. Oh, and thanks for the place in your contest! Gave a fist pump when I saw that!
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Date: 4/20/2013 7:19:00 AM
You keep that up and I will have to crawl back in bed...your imagery ROCKS!...your essence wraps around my dream....I'm not likely to see a line that cool for some time.
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Date: 4/20/2013 5:31:00 AM
Beautiful emerald imagery of adoration. Thanks........., loved always, bl
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