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Love Song

Your melody rocks me to sleep each night with thoughts of candy floss clouds floating aimlessly on by ice cold lemonade for two chilling our summertime heat as I picnic in the shadows of your mind In my morning when I wake my heart beats and I whistle along to the tune of the songbirds I skip and I twirl under the apple blossoms as the sun greets me with her smile I can't help but daydream the sea breeze brushes your blushed cheek blowing your long flowing hazel hair 'cross your face wishing away worries setting off dreams of me my silhouette up on the dune gazing back at you humming a lover's tune two lost souls running to meet hearts race lips embrace another lover's song again you rock me to sleep
09/03/2015

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Date: 9/5/2015 2:49:00 PM
Absolutely romantic, Tim! Indeed a lovely love song. Love the phrase "picnic in the shadows of your mind". #7 All the best. // paul
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Date: 9/5/2015 9:27:00 AM
Always the Perfect Romantic pieces... This was beautiful.
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Date: 9/5/2015 12:49:00 AM
Indeed, a love song, Tim! Summer romance is almost finished. You will need to do fall to winter now!
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Date: 9/4/2015 11:38:00 PM
Summer dreams intwine themselves, tugging on heartstrings, creating melodies of love. Enchanting Tim!
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Date: 9/4/2015 3:29:00 PM
Tim, such a dreamy romantic write, I like it a lot and thanks for visiting my pirate poem
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Date: 9/4/2015 2:44:00 PM
- Really one beautiful song, romantic and sweet Tim - I wish you a wonderful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/4/2015 12:45:00 PM
Such romantic words in this poem you can feel summer and romance in the air. If a daydream what a nice daydream to have. lol love phyl
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Date: 9/4/2015 7:21:00 AM
As always, your heart is a river of romantic feelings, Tim! Excellent work!
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Date: 9/4/2015 1:18:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me.You are a natural-born romantic.I bet the first words you uttered after the word ma,were whispers,dreams,breezes and love..cuz that is what your verses sound like...A fav.
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Date: 9/4/2015 12:15:00 AM
I adore this xoxoxoxo
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Date: 9/3/2015 10:38:00 PM
Wow Tim, a perfect romantic, daydreaming, wonderful imagery!
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Date: 9/3/2015 5:37:00 PM
In a daydream, Tim... Love the way you pull romanticism. Always LINDA
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Date: 9/3/2015 5:01:00 PM
Tim exceptional imagery. Excellent write. Just think getting rocked to sleep with your partner and maybe some Eagles music good combo. lol. Enjoyed this write.
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Date: 9/3/2015 4:12:00 PM
Beautiful romantic imagery Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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