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It doesn't have to be Halloween to get creeped out.

I'm soaking in a nice hot bath. Ridding myself of the day's aftermath. Then it begins, a dripping noise. This house can play tricks like bad little boys.. It seems to be coming from inside the wall; But it's been checked before and there's no one to call. Bath all done and I'm dressed for bed. Wearily down the stair case I tread, To sit by the fire in the living room, And sip hot tea alone in the gloom. I hear the stair case begin to creak. I look up startled but do not speak. I go to look up the empty stair well. Where the noise came from I cannot tell. I hear it again, a tap, tap, tap. As though someone is walking, pat, pat, pat. I look down the hall and back up the stairs, But find not a thing, there's just no one there. The house is empty, I'm here all alone. Even my cat of late doesn't come home. During the day not a sound, not a peep, But let the sun set and the house moans and creaks. Well, I've come this far and I'm still alright. I don't think there's call to shake with fright. Things should be as quiet as a mouse, Were I really alone in this old house. I've not been approached, accosted or harmed, So I don't think there's any cause for alarm. I've noticed at times when I have a guest, The ghost is quiet, it's manners the best. Perhaps it's the house, perhaps it's a ghost. Whichever, whatever to one I am host. I think we'll get along just fine, And I'll get used to it given some time. It's all over now and I'm through with fright. I've decided some things just go bump in the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/10/2016 11:02:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem Judy. Would be a nice one to re post around Halloween. love phyl
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/11/2016 1:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Phyl. Wonderful having you back. God Bless, JB
Date: 12/10/2016 5:55:00 AM
Captivating and intriguing! A well-behaving ghost should cause us any alarm for our help it asks! Enjoyed the poem dear, Judy! Treat it well!
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/11/2016 1:05:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB
Date: 12/7/2016 10:50:00 AM
This is exciting. Glad to hear it was only just a friendly ghost. Love daver
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/11/2016 12:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Daver. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Date: 12/7/2016 12:25:00 AM
Hey, Judy, does this have any basis in truth?I hear of so many ghost stories on tv. It would be kind of cool if they were "nice" ghosts. Cute story.
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/11/2016 12:53:00 PM
Actually we used to live in an old house built back in the 1920's back in Ontario that made those noises at night. It was pretty creepy when you were up late alone. Couldn't get a baby sitter to stay there so we could go out. Glad you liked this. God Bless and thanks bunches. JB
Date: 12/6/2016 9:24:00 PM
Suspenseful read, old houses do take on a life and personality all their own.
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/11/2016 12:47:00 PM
Indeed they do. Thanks so much for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB
Date: 12/6/2016 4:16:00 PM
You ably set the background for a dark and chilly night, Judy; you kept me in suspense right to the very end. Finally I took courage from your words... but is it really the end...or is there more to come!! #7 ~ Regards // paul
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/6/2016 4:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul. Glad you liked this scary little tale. You know how old houses can make eerie noises. Thanks bunches and God Bless, JB

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