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Her Stilettos

.    The sound of
   Stilettos         coming   home. 
  The echo                            reverberates
 In the empty hall,
My heart
And my soul
Is at pure    ease
To know             that 
Its soul                   mate 
Has come                    home. 
In the                              morning
 Stilettos                                 make
  Deep                                         sounds
   Of their                                            lone
    Departured                                         echoes.
      My                                                         mind
        Yearns                                                     and
         Waits                                                         for
           The                                                           sound to                    return.
            The                                                            satisfying sound  of   resounding
              Steps                                                         from the one I love                to satisfy
                Step                                                           their way down the             long corridor. 
                  The                                                            countdown  begins  after  the evening news 
                    I                                                                like    to  wait  and  listen  to  the  beauty  of
                     The                                                            last 10  steps reciting     their poems in taps
                      In                                                               a rhythmic sequence      of  poetic bliss.
                      10                                                                      -9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1...I’m home.

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  1. Date: 6/5/2010 10:22:00 PM
    Incredible, Raul. This was very very good! and you made an awesome picture. Romantic and a great win! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 10:10:00 AM
    Raul, you never cease to amaze me with your artistic side when it comes to Concrete. This must have taken ages, many congratulations on your win in Amy's contest >> James

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 8:43:00 PM
    Hi Raul --wow! I can't even begin to imagine how you formatted this poem--you really did a superb job with this stiletto! Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 7:49:00 PM
    Raul, congratulations on this winning Concrete! What an amazing job you did on this....very impressive. Well done. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 7:43:00 PM
    Dear Raul, Congratulations on YOUR well Deserved 2nd place win Amy Green's Contest "Complete Concrete" I was looking a the HOT POEMS and saw YOUR Concrete Masterpiece I immediately went to Member Winners and there YOU were Absolutely Amazing Write ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 2:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Raul. You have quite an artistic flair. Great shape to this one!

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 2:02:00 PM
    I knew this was going to be a winner..How long did it take you to do this..for petes sake? This is outstanding..congrats to you my friend. BG

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 12:28:00 PM
    Well just knew this would be in the top spot Raul so big congrats on your 2nd place with this unique and amazing design and poejm..enjoy..your well deserved win...with luv from the "Sweetheart" and good luck in your own contest...

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 12:23:00 PM
    Raul- Astounding job. The Stiletto is perfect, shape wise and the poem is excellent. I can't imagine how you pulled this one off, graphically. Very original. Congrats on your placement.

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 3:00:00 PM
    Nice poem and the graphic is SEXY!

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 7:25:00 AM
    Love this! JB

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 8:01:00 AM
    A most excellent verse and a real winner! And it looks mar vel ous!!!!!Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 4:25:00 PM
    this is really cool art! Raul! jimbo

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 12:21:00 PM
    How creative Concrete, dear Raul. Good luck in the contest. Soup Mail.

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 12:03:00 PM
    Awesome. This is very creative and artistic. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:46:00 PM
    clearly a top pick raul....... this is a great job, hoping all the best in the contest......

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:36:00 PM
    Has to be number one ...first place .. has to be Amy's favorite entry ..this is unique and sweet Raul and good luck in the contest.. inventive creation ... u are truly an artist and poet .. a great combo... enjoyed this creative write with artistic design..luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:31:00 PM
    Absolutely stunning. Creative, imaginative, artistic and well wriiten. I bow to your genius. I am not worthy, I am not worthy.

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:15:00 PM
    wow,wow. .to my favz Raul

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:14:00 PM
    NICE... I love her stilettos my friend... I can hear her coming.... NICE...:JP]