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Her Stilettos

. The sound of Stilettos coming home. The echo reverberates In the empty hall, My heart Salivates, And my soul Is at pure ease To know that Its soul mate Has come home. In the morning Stilettos make Deep sounds Of their lone Departured echoes. My mind Yearns and Waits for The sound to return. The satisfying sound of resounding Steps from the one I love to satisfy Step their way down the long corridor. The countdown begins after the evening news I like to wait and listen to the beauty of The last 10 steps reciting their poems in taps In a rhythmic sequence of poetic bliss. 10 -9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1...I’m home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/5/2010 10:22:00 PM
Incredible, Raul. This was very very good! and you made an awesome picture. Romantic and a great win! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/26/2010 10:10:00 AM
Raul, you never cease to amaze me with your artistic side when it comes to Concrete. This must have taken ages, many congratulations on your win in Amy's contest >> James
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:43:00 PM
Hi Raul --wow! I can't even begin to imagine how you formatted this poem--you really did a superb job with this stiletto! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/24/2010 7:43:00 PM
Dear Raul, Congratulations on YOUR well Deserved 2nd place win Amy Green's Contest "Complete Concrete" I was looking a the HOT POEMS and saw YOUR Concrete Masterpiece I immediately went to Member Winners and there YOU were Absolutely Amazing Write ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 5/24/2010 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Raul. You have quite an artistic flair. Great shape to this one!
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Date: 5/24/2010 2:02:00 PM
I knew this was going to be a winner..How long did it take you to do this..for petes sake? This is outstanding..congrats to you my friend. BG
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Date: 5/24/2010 1:19:00 PM
This is so creative and artistic. Congratulations on placing second in Amy's contest. This took some real talent to plan and develop. I am impressed. Keep that talent coming! Karen
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Date: 5/24/2010 12:28:00 PM
Well just knew this would be in the top spot Raul so big congrats on your 2nd place with this unique and amazing design and poejm..enjoy..your well deserved win...with luv from the "Sweetheart" and good luck in your own contest...
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Date: 5/24/2010 12:23:00 PM
Raul- Astounding job. The Stiletto is perfect, shape wise and the poem is excellent. I can't imagine how you pulled this one off, graphically. Very original. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 5/21/2010 3:00:00 PM
Nice poem and the graphic is SEXY!
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Date: 5/16/2010 7:25:00 AM
Love this! JB
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Date: 5/14/2010 8:01:00 AM
A most excellent verse and a real winner! And it looks mar vel ous!!!!!Light & Love
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:25:00 PM
this is really cool art! Raul! jimbo
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Date: 5/12/2010 12:21:00 PM
How creative Concrete, dear Raul. Good luck in the contest. Soup Mail.
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Date: 5/12/2010 12:03:00 PM
Awesome. This is very creative and artistic. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:46:00 PM
clearly a top pick raul....... this is a great job, hoping all the best in the contest......
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:36:00 PM
Has to be number one ...first place .. has to be Amy's favorite entry ..this is unique and sweet Raul and good luck in the contest.. inventive creation ... u are truly an artist and poet .. a great combo... enjoyed this creative write with artistic design..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:31:00 PM
Absolutely stunning. Creative, imaginative, artistic and well wriiten. I bow to your genius. I am not worthy, I am not worthy.
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:15:00 PM
wow,wow. .to my favz Raul
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:14:00 PM
NICE... I love her stilettos my friend... I can hear her coming.... NICE...:JP]
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Date: 5/11/2010 6:09:00 PM
Oh wow!!!!!!! This is amazing, Raul!!!! How can anyone top this creative masterpiece!!!??? Excellent! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/11/2010 5:44:00 PM
Your creativity never ceases to amaze me, excellent piece.
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Date: 5/11/2010 5:28:00 PM
Fine layout and nice expressions
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Date: 5/11/2010 5:24:00 PM
Nice Job!! Really enjoyed. -Mike
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Date: 5/11/2010 5:03:00 PM
wow, impressive, nice one and enjoyed
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