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Awakened From a Deep Sleep

In the sunshine on the living-room rug Sparkles was asleep in the sun How I longed to give her a hug He ears perked up from her sleep When she heard a Dove's sing Quickly she bounded To the glass door On the floor She sat Stared

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/17/2023 8:34:00 AM

Sweet little kitties. They do sense sound and motion. I know she gave you a hug once the excitement of the dove passed. :)

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 7/25/2022 4:30:00 PM

lovely write enjoyed reading this piece.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/26/2022 4:00:00 AM

Hello Yolanda, so nice to see you. I hope all is well with you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/23/2022 10:58:00 AM

What a wonderful write/story. I love this one. Have a blessed day...................

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2022 3:22:00 PM

Hello Paula, Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2022 12:04:00 AM

Ahhh!! That cat knows she would love some bird for lunch. She definitely has great hearing. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2022 4:05:00 AM

Hello Sara, no I do not think so. I love birds. I would not let her get close to a bird. Thank you for the great comment. Yes she has great hearing. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/11/2022 11:28:00 AM

Really lovely, Darlene! These are real moments of life when we observe things happening in our surrounding we might not have noticed before! Even a cat enjoys a dove's song! Your Sparkles must be very special! Love ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/11/2022 4:46:00 PM

Hello Mala, Sparkles sat at the glass door for hours watching the Dove. She is getting brave now. Yes my Sparkles is special. Love & Friendship Darlene.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/7/2022 4:02:00 PM

Well written Etheree, Darlene. I've never tried to write one yet. Maybe soon though? Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/9/2022 6:33:00 AM

Hello Bill, thank you for the lovely comment. Go ahead give it a try. Your poetess friend. Darlene hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/9/2022 6:32:00 AM

Hello Bill, thank you for the lovely comment. Go ahead give it a try. Your poetess friend. Darlene

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/21/2022 12:59:00 PM

Hi. My daughter and I read this fantastic poem, Darlene, and we loved it!! Therefore, this a delightful Fave. Thank you for sharing this gem! Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2022 2:57:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, thank you for the fav. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend ..Darlene xx

Len Gasun

Date: 6/21/2022 12:52:00 AM

Wow! A lovely cat who appreciates music. So sweet my dear friend. I enjoyed reading your awesome verse this afternoon. Thanks a lot for sharing. More blessings to you. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2022 5:11:00 AM

Hello Len, yes she loves music. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Good morning. Your welcome. Hugs.

Valsa George

Date: 6/20/2022 10:13:00 PM

Sparkle, I am sure has a keen sense of hearing. In fact all cats have. A rug is a cat's most cozy place of rest. Love the poem Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2022 5:06:00 AM

Hello Valsa, yes a rug is a cozy place for cat. Thank you Valsa. Hugs.

Robert Gorelick

Date: 6/19/2022 6:37:00 PM

How restful and content Sparkles must be. Oh, lucky cat! Robert

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/20/2022 4:28:00 AM

Hello Robert Gorelick, yes Sparkles is a lucky cat. She is also now a happy cat. Enjoy your day my friend.

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/19/2022 3:07:00 PM

I love cats Darlene, enjoy Sparkles she is precious, please come and visit! Anaya

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/20/2022 4:33:00 AM

Hello I Am Anaya, yes Sparkles is precious. She is a rescues. She is 9 years old. I will visit your site. Hugs. Enjoy your day. Darlene

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/19/2022 6:31:00 AM

So lovely, touching, and precious, Darlene. Have a great weekend

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/19/2022 7:05:00 AM

Hello Soto, thank you for the lovely comment. Dotto enjoy your day my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/18/2022 7:06:00 AM

It must be a joy to watch her Darlene!! I'm so glad that you have each other!! happy Saturday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/18/2022 12:19:00 PM

Hello Mike, yes Mike it is a joy to watch her. We enjoy play time. She sleeps with me all night. She has her cute ways about her . She wakes me in the early morning to. If it is too early i go back to sleep. Happy Sarturday. xxxx-oooo.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/18/2022 3:12:00 AM

A marvelous awaking, dearest Darlene. Blessings!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/18/2022 5:15:00 AM

Hello Demetrois, so nice to see you. I hope all is well. Yes it is marvelous. Enjoy your day my dearest friend.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/17/2022 10:56:00 PM

So lovely and caring, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/18/2022 5:13:00 AM

Hello Harry, thank you Harry. My cat is a rescues. i have now for 4months. Enjoy your day my friend.

Ann Cantu

Date: 6/17/2022 5:23:00 PM

sweet dog dreams - this poem makes me happy

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/18/2022 5:12:00 AM

Hello Ann Cantu, this was not a dream. I do not have a dog. I adopted a rescues cat. As I created this pom it made me smile. Enjoy your day my friend. So nice to meet you.

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/17/2022 2:02:00 PM

Cats are great company and meditation to wonder -- doves are music. Of course, to other friends of ours, they are more a meal. Who knows. I had a black cat that seemed to love birds...would not hurt a feather. Go figure.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/17/2022 4:26:00 PM

Hello Joe DiMino, Yes Joe cats are great company. yes meditation is wonderful. My cat just watches the birds. She is a patch tabby and is 9 years old. Loving and playful. Enjoy your evening my friend.