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A Beautiful Day

Bright eyes, blue skies, it's a beautiful day! "Let's go, Mama!" her cheer, down the tall slide, no fear. Twisting, bumping, "this is fun" one more bend then it's done. from the bottom goofy laughter. One more go, another after. "Come on, Mama!" she tugs off to the swings after hugs. back and forth, smiles soar keep on going, swing some more! Chain rattles with gaining speed, she kicks her legs with excited need. "Look at me Mama, I'm going high! Look Mama, look Mama, I caught the sky!" "There Mama, let's play in the sand" off the swing in a quick demand. Castle made with stick flags on top, another bucket and we don't stop. Laying back she buries her toes and wiggles when sand gets in her nose. Shake it off she says "I'm hungry" it's time for a picnic, her and me. Days like this, so fun and sweet. Mama and daughter, summer heat. True smiles of discovery always to be cherished... my girl and me. Blue skies, Bright eyes, it's a beautiful day!

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Date: 7/15/2018 10:47:00 PM
This is sweet and lovely.Time spent with the little ones is so precious.You’ve captured it perfectly.Thank you Casarah.
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Date: 7/1/2018 1:30:00 AM
You got your fun straight from the source! Congrats on a fine win. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/1/2018 12:50:00 AM
Lovely write, Casarah, brought back some nice memories. Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 6/30/2018 6:10:00 PM
Such wonderful moments shared with mother and daughter. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Such a fun write. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/30/2018 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful mom and daughter play day story. Enjoyed. Imagery was great! :)
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Date: 6/30/2018 10:35:00 AM
Back with a Big Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/30/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Eve, Hugs x
Date: 6/24/2018 2:37:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you ve painted of you and your little girl...Indeed it describes..A Beautiful Day :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 2:54:00 PM
We have many, and many more to come. thanks for sharing with us. hugs
Date: 6/23/2018 3:14:00 AM
This is a lovely picture of your relationship with your daughter that you have painted with your words Casarah. It brings back many memories of time spent with my now grownup children,although I now have the added pleasure of grand and great grand children.A lovely read. Thank you.
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Date: 6/24/2018 2:53:00 PM
aww, I am so glad you have so many memories and children to follow after generations, that is so wonderful . Hugs
Date: 6/21/2018 7:45:00 PM
From reviews below, this fine-art of yours unravels beautiful memories in the hearts and minds of your readers, Casarah...I enthusiastically follow suit!
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Date: 6/24/2018 2:52:00 PM
Thank you :) This poem made me smile, and I hope others too.
Date: 6/21/2018 5:05:00 PM
Such a good poem. I can still remember the times with my daughters.
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Date: 6/24/2018 2:52:00 PM
Good memories, hold on to those :)
Date: 6/20/2018 6:59:00 PM
Such a good memory of your time with your daughter. I still remember my times, with my boys and the fun active activities..Hugs Eve ~ ‘ *
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Date: 6/21/2018 7:02:00 AM
It is one of the greatest things in the world, the time spent with children. hugs.
Date: 6/20/2018 6:23:00 PM
this is SO darling and I can really imagine you right there in the moment with your daughter, Casarah. It is so nice to see you here at Soup!!
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Date: 6/21/2018 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, we have been taking a few weeks off of schooling and I have a little bit of time on my hands, happy to be back and posting again. thanks for reading. you are sweet. hugs
Date: 6/20/2018 3:27:00 PM
Nothing would ever surpass a Mother's joy than the happiness of her child! You know it very well dearest, Casarah and you witness every day when your child jumps for joy! Beautifully done!
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:59:00 AM
I am very lucky to have the time with her as I can, and I am happy to share the joy in my words and photos. I show her everyday the flowers you send in pictures, it is part of our morning. Thank you for sharing those with us.
Date: 6/20/2018 2:23:00 PM
Awww... such a great mummy you are and your daughter must be growing fast... Nice to see she inspired this one Cassie..
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:58:00 AM
She is growing so smart and kind, turning 7 this weekend. It is a pleasure. thanks for sharing in our moment.
Date: 6/20/2018 1:19:00 PM
What a terrific write. Your daughter will love it too and even more as time moves on!
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:57:00 AM
As time moves on, the memories will remain, so happy to share them and the joy they bring.
Date: 6/20/2018 12:38:00 PM
Enjoy those very special days for they grow up so fast. Love this easy carefree poem. love phyl
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:55:00 AM
Oh don't I know it, she turns 7 on Sunday! way too fast
Date: 6/20/2018 12:10:00 PM
This is a fun read, Cass. Any time spent with one's child is always rewarding for all:)
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:54:00 AM
It sure is! Thanks
Date: 6/20/2018 10:59:00 AM
when mama and daughter get together to play in the sun, it's always a beautiful day. Your poem is light hearted and well received, Thanks for sharing Casarah
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thanks for reading! :) :)
Date: 6/20/2018 8:51:00 AM
Love this bright and inspiring poem my friend. This gem brought forth many treasured memories of my daughter and her younger years! Truly superb poetry my friend! A fav....
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:53:00 AM
It is those moments in life that live on! hugs
Date: 6/20/2018 8:35:00 AM
This is sweet and adorable! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:52:00 AM
Thanks, I have a pretty adorable muse :)

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