Sorrow Potd

oh, with a breath that trembles tears of sorrow fall through puddles I walk 9/28/2022 Sponsored by: JCB Brul Contest Name: Empathy

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 2/28/2023 9:55:00 AM

Written on the very eve that I decided to join the Soup..... beautiful and belated congrats on POTD for a wonderful piece!!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/8/2022 7:48:00 PM

I'm back with congratulations on POTD, with this awesome creation, Eve. Blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2022 1:21:00 PM

ohhh, I really like this one! Congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2022 11:45:00 AM

- A great line written about empathy - ... congratulations on your win :) -

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/4/2022 5:57:00 AM

Even without boots! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2022 10:19:00 AM

Love how you did your monoku, Eve. Very well done.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/30/2022 10:51:00 PM

Eve, so concise, yet “summarizes” one of the most profound experiences a person may realize. Humility opens the door to God”$ touch, which 99% of the time (due to either the gracing of joy or -in this case forgiveness probably for some mistake) Tears would indicate that in response to the trembling soul’s breath, there was a direct touch by God. Glorious penning!xo

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/30/2022 9:22:00 PM

Wow, the perfect Monoku, Eve, broken into the correct syllables as well...Love this. Stay Well My friend. Harry

Eve Roper

Date: 9/30/2022 8:44:00 PM

Thank you, to all. Many blessings to everyone of you.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/30/2022 6:21:00 PM

Lately, "through puddles I walk," as emotions flow freely. (true moments in my world). Tears seem to cleanse the heart and the soul. Your thoughts curl softly around me. Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy