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sorrow POTD

oh, with a breath that trembles tears of sorrow fall through puddles I walk 9/28/2022 Sponsored by: JCB Brul Contest Name: Empathy

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Date: 10/8/2022 7:48:00 PM
I'm back with congratulations on POTD, with this awesome creation, Eve. Blessings
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Date: 10/4/2022 1:21:00 PM
ohhh, I really like this one! Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/4/2022 11:45:00 AM
- A great line written about empathy - ... congratulations on your win :) -
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Date: 10/4/2022 5:57:00 AM
Even without boots! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/1/2022 10:19:00 AM
Love how you did your monoku, Eve. Very well done.
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Date: 9/30/2022 10:51:00 PM
Eve, so concise, yet “summarizes” one of the most profound experiences a person may realize. Humility opens the door to God”$ touch, which 99% of the time (due to either the gracing of joy or -in this case forgiveness probably for some mistake) Tears would indicate that in response to the trembling soul’s breath, there was a direct touch by God. Glorious penning!xo
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Date: 9/30/2022 9:22:00 PM
Wow, the perfect Monoku, Eve, broken into the correct syllables as well...Love this. Stay Well My friend. Harry
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Date: 9/30/2022 8:44:00 PM
Thank you, to all. Many blessings to everyone of you.
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Date: 9/30/2022 6:21:00 PM
Lately, "through puddles I walk," as emotions flow freely. (true moments in my world). Tears seem to cleanse the heart and the soul. Your thoughts curl softly around me. Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/30/2022 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Eve. Such a wonderful Monoku - you truly deserve the honour. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 9/30/2022 5:05:00 PM
Eve, beautiful and heart wrenching and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
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Date: 9/30/2022 11:49:00 AM
Emotions give way to tears, Congrats on POTD Eve,
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Date: 9/30/2022 11:48:00 AM
Emotive write! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/30/2022 10:38:00 AM
- Agree with Michael a heartfelt poem, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 9/30/2022 10:03:00 AM
Eve a heartfelt piece. Congratulations on receiving POTD. God bless you...
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Date: 9/30/2022 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on Eve Roper on POTD! Parting is such sweet sorrow. Love your "US" too Robert! ~Anaya
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Date: 9/30/2022 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Sorrow and empathy such tragic twins. Robert
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Date: 9/30/2022 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Eve. Very good imagery for a Monoku. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 9/30/2022 7:23:00 AM
Love the way this moved from tiny tears to voluminous puddles. Lovely penned POTD, Eve! Here's to tears of Joy! :) Gershon
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Date: 9/30/2022 7:12:00 AM
Eve, so deep. congratulations on POTD~ Warren
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Date: 9/30/2022 7:03:00 AM
So full of imagery. Well done for your POTD. Hugs.
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Date: 9/30/2022 6:13:00 AM
What a beautiful monoku on sorrow! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/30/2022 5:53:00 AM
Awesome. Congratulations on POTD. Linda
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Date: 9/30/2022 5:15:00 AM
Poignant and powerful. Congratulations Eve on your POTD
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Date: 9/30/2022 4:44:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Eve. Enjoy your day.
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