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Life Through a Child's Eyes Premiere Contest Winner

finding shapes in clouds or four-leaf clovers in fields . . . the child’s eye searches What does it mean to view life through a child’s eyes? For me it means searching for things of wonder to revel in. Also it means enjoying simple things, which as adults, we eventually seem to lose interest in. I recall my childhood winter vacation times: the eagerness with which I donned my woolen scarf and mittens just to go sledding down a hill of snow over and over and over again in the cold. Even if I were as limber and daring as I was in the old days, I cannot imagine having any desire at all to slide down hills of snow today. Spring would come along, and I’d jump in puddles after the rain with no thought to how dirty I might be getting. Would I have no care in the world doing that today? I recall summers of my childhood. Oh, how sweet it was when school let out for summer vacation. I relished so many things: riding my bike, chasing my siblings with a hose, walking a long way just to splash in the city pool; then trekking back home wearing a popsycle smile. What pleasure I took in the neighborhood games of volleyball, kickball, tag or hide-and-seek. Today I have other interests that consume me, and games I might play today would rarely involve physical activity! Then there were the autumns of my youth, especially Halloween and my running door to door gathering more candy in my brown paper bag than almost anybody else in my family. How I must have annoyed the people whose doors I knocked on at 10 p.m. These days, I turn off my own house lights by 9 p.m. to feign having gone to bed when youngsters dare to show the same audacity which I myself exhibited as a young trick-or-treater! How differently we view the world as small children from the way we view things today. Those seasonal activities that enthralled us as children give way for other exciting life events: dating, college, traveling, marriage. Maybe the secret is not so much in WHAT we are doing but more in the level of excitement that we FEEL for what we do as adults. We must keep strong our joy in celebrating life, even if the activities that enthrall the adult versions of ourselves have changed. Finally, I suppose we can never recapture our childlike passion for swinging on swings or searching for four-leaf clovers, but we can relive the joy of these simple pleasures by watching as our children or grandchildren engage in these activities for the first time! Long ago, I would have dreams of soaring through the sky. Those dreams vanished with time. Perhaps my flying dreams represented for me the hope of a future that I could not possibly comprehend in my childhood’s mind. How fanciful is the child’s mind and how wondrous is the world through his eyes. chasing fireflies that flit through dusks of summer . . . dreaming of flying June 26, 2022 For the "Like a Child" Poetry Contest of Regina McIntosh

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Date: 8/17/2022 10:48:00 AM
I give up! Twice now my comments have disappeared into the ether. I loved your poem. congrats on first!
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Date: 8/17/2022 10:47:00 AM
Well, shoot. I finally got around to commenting on your poem, and my comments disappeared into the ether. Anyhow, your poem is wonderful, and covers most facets of childhood in a most loving way. Congrats on first!
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Date: 8/17/2022 10:42:00 AM
Well, shoot. I see I haven't commented on your poem. It's just wonderful, Andrea. and covers so many facets of childhood. And I love your firefly mention. Congrats on first!
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Date: 7/30/2022 6:13:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win. You have a lot of great details in your prose. I like the last line of your ending haiku, "dreaming of flying." I'm also glad that you liked my haibun. It was a pleasure to write. I'm glad both of us did well.
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Date: 7/27/2022 7:08:00 AM
Andrea, I am finally getting to this wondrous poem of your ! Belated congratulations on your win ! I can relate to your memories of childhood so well . I enjoyed many of the same things and I did a lot of tree climbing as well !! Fun times and happy memories you have woven together so well. Hugs to you , Susan :)
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Date: 7/26/2022 2:33:00 AM
You are young at heart Andrea, which means you will never grow old. I know how much it must mean to you to win the Trophy in this contest. It is so very deserving. Congratulations my friend. You will need a special room to keep all your trophy’s in. I couldn’t be happier for you! Love and Hugs, Connie xxoo
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Date: 7/26/2022 12:30:00 PM
you know me so well by now, connie. Also my numbers 3, 5 and 7 are the Peter Pan numbers of numerology!
Date: 7/24/2022 10:26:00 PM
How quickly the years go so fast, and how things change. Interesting to read and a good explanation of how different things are now. It was a lovely description. Well written.
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Date: 7/23/2022 10:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your outstanding haibun my dear friend and your well-deserved first win! Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Hugs
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Date: 7/22/2022 9:55:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your trophy win Andrea !
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Date: 7/22/2022 4:22:00 AM
I’m not a fan of Haibun but your write is simply outstanding! Congrats on your trophy win, Andrea! My the light of childhood innocence continue to glow in your heart
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Date: 7/21/2022 1:04:00 PM
spread those wings Andrea, your flight isn't over yet......
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Date: 7/21/2022 1:01:00 PM
So many memories come to mind. Congratulations on your Trophy win Andrea, and an amazing write! Hugs ~Anaya
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Date: 7/21/2022 10:02:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your trophy win. Each season viewed and re-viewed through the eyes of a child in the exuberance of life! Wonderful haibun! Hopefully some of that zest still remains.
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Date: 7/21/2022 8:41:00 AM
Enjoying life as children was fun, if we could still be that child. Congratulations on your win my friend
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Date: 7/21/2022 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful write/story. Have a blessed day................
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Date: 7/21/2022 5:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win! You certainly have defined how the world appears to a child.....(oh to dream again!) Beautifully done. :)Paulette
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Date: 7/21/2022 3:42:00 AM
Thorough looking back of life. Beautiful reflections. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/21/2022 2:27:00 AM
This is such an amazing write. I just love it so... A fave. Congrats on your top win. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/10/2022 11:27:00 AM
Great read. Loved the storytelling and reminiscing and reflection.
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Date: 6/29/2022 10:57:00 PM
God bless you Andrea, for this reminisce And great exemplar on childhood pursuits '
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Date: 6/28/2022 1:22:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your Haibun, Andrea. The phrase, age appropriate, comes to mind. The things we have, think, and do change as we mature and become more aware of who we are and what we enjoy. Choldhood is wonderful and full of hope, adventures and dreams. Each age offers the same experiences, in age appropriate manners. Good luck in the contest my friend! Bill
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Date: 6/28/2022 8:36:00 AM
This is wonderful, Andrea. A fave poem. I like the line, "finding shapes in clouds," and it only keeps better from there. Seeing things through the eyes of a child enriches our lives. Such visions can lead to great poems.
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Date: 6/27/2022 9:38:00 AM
Hi, you caught all the things my brothers and I did when we were little. We also dug a deep hole in our backyard hoping to reach China.
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Date: 6/27/2022 5:44:00 AM
how wonderful this is, capturing that stage in life. more so the depth within this is that which each leap of civilization children's lot in life grew and this is a pinnacle in that equation deftly exposed
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Date: 6/27/2022 1:47:00 AM
Memories of childhood emerge for everyone in this Haibun. There is of course many different aspects as your tradition and mine are so different. I will never forget playing soccer in a field in front of a church demolished with German bombs. Such a long time. Hugs.
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