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For Pick -A-Title, Vol 45-Poetry Contest. Sponsored By Edward Ibeh, Written on 6th August 2024.

 

 

A special thanks to Indiana Shaw who has created a song using my poem on You Tube.

 

Pete Kovacs was a cop based in Cyprus, a small mid-western town Nothing much happened with regards to crime from sunup to sundown But on the 4th of June a couple came in to report their daughter missing They were visiting Cedar Lakes on a break, for a picnic and some fishing. He sat them down to ask questions, her age, name and what she was wearing It took them quite a while because they were both very distraught and crying They told him that she was only seven years old and that her name was Sky Then he went outside on the street to ask for volunteers from people passing by. There was no shortage of volunteers, and they all headed for Cedar Lakes Pete formed four search groups and vowed to search for as long as it takes But he had some dark thoughts, he thought the girl might have drowned Sending for a dive team was the last thing he'd do if she couldn't be found. He gave each group a two-way radio and pointed to four areas on a map Then gave clear instructions to each group so that they wouldn't overlap The area around Cedar lakes was surrounded by a forest of dense trees They set off on that hot afternoon, and off the lake blew a welcome breeze. The minutes had now turned to hours and darkness replaced light Pete had radioed a deputy in town to bring torches for the night Then he studied the map to ensure that no area had been missed And put a call out to the local army base for more people to assist. An ambulance with a paramedic and doctor then arrived at the scene Along with a large catering van from town and a mobile canteen Pete called everyone back from the search for a rest and some food Everyone looked quite exhausted and were in a very sombre mood. Two large army vehicles then pulled up with about thirty men or so Pete spoke to the senior officer in charge and told them where to go The others now rested headed out to where they had searched before Then a message came through that they’d found a toy on the forest floor. Pete radioed the volunteers to concentrate on where the toy was found They searched the area with a fine-tooth comb without making any sound He thought she wouldn't be too far from her toy of that he had no doubt. Sadly, they found nothing else of interest and they carried on further south. He phoned the police department at Hastings to request a sniffer dog team Fatigue was taking its toll on everyone; it was like living a nightmare-dream He held off requesting a dive team but felt they might be needed before long But something didn’t feel right, deep down he knew something was wrong. Just before sunup he took a radio and went to where they’d found the toy And remembered playing there with his friends when he was a young boy Just off the main track behind some thick bushes was a six-foot drop He wondered did Sky go through the bushes, slipped, and fell off the top. The bushes had now grown quite thick from when he was a young boy But he managed to squeeze through them and then heard a pitiful cry Pete's feeling of foreboding now gave way to a feeling of euphoria They wouldn’t have known about the ditch despite searching that area. And there at the bottom of the ditch and lying motionless was Sky When she saw Pete, her lip quivered, and then she started to cry Pete said "It's okay you’re safe now, she smiled through her tears Then he radioed in to report it, and he could hear the rousing cheers. Everyone came to the scene and they brought her out on a stretcher She had broken her leg and an arm, so they were gentle with her Her parents were overjoyed, and her mom stood clutching her toy Sky’s parents and many of the volunteers were now crying with joy. They went straight over to the waiting ambulance and put Sky inside Both her mom and dad climbed in with the doctor and sat by her side Pete thanked everyone for their help and told Sky she was very brave And in the shadow of sunlight, she gave him a big smile and a wave.

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Date: 9/23/2024 2:22:00 AM
Superb all round Tom and Indiana. This is wonderful. I think voice over actors must be worrying about the future when you listen to the robot here. Great storytelling. Your stories always have a great lyrical quality about them. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 9/23/2024 2:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Gary, I'm happy you enjoyed the story. Indiana done a great job with the video. I read Suno are being challenged in the courts as they feed singers voices into the mix, It's still online when I last looked. I'm tempted to build an ark, it's lashing down here in Worcestershire. Tom
Date: 9/17/2024 6:57:00 AM
I am ever intrigued by your storytelling Tom. Fabulous! :)
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Date: 9/17/2024 7:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're keeping well, greetings from Spain, I'm travelling again. Tom
Date: 9/10/2024 12:44:00 AM
It's incredibly professional, but then a tale from a great storyteller like you deserves to sound this great.
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Date: 9/10/2024 2:27:00 AM
Lol
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/10/2024 1:03:00 AM
"Ain't nothing like the real thing, Baby," sang Marvin Gaye.
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Date: 9/10/2024 12:54:00 AM
Thank you very much for your return visit Lin. His voice sounds better than mine, even if it's a robot lol. Tom
Date: 9/9/2024 2:32:00 AM
Amazing! This is so cool and catchy! I really love the music marrying your words for the perfect presentation! Cool beans! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/9/2024 5:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Karen, it was Indiana who used my poem and created a song out of it and put it on YouTube, she's a genius. Tom
Date: 9/7/2024 10:13:00 AM
Wow. Congrats on your song being on YouTube. It was an interesting story with great ending. Did it really happen?
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Date: 9/7/2024 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, it was a fictional write then Indiana read it and enjoyed and asked could she make a song from it and put it on YouTube. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 8/31/2024 8:42:00 AM
I loved this narrative and with a happy ending too. Way to write and congratulations!
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Date: 8/31/2024 10:13:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Alesia, I get an idea and then challenge myself to put the story in rhyme, it's not always easy when you can't find a keyword to rhyme with another. Tom
Date: 8/23/2024 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. You are the great storyteller. Hooray!!! Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 8/23/2024 1:50:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Paula, much appreciated. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 8/22/2024 3:59:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win with this magnificent narrative poem, Tom. You're the best at this form, in my opinion.
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Date: 8/22/2024 4:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Edward, I'm happy you enjoyed the story. Thanks for my placement and hosting the contest. Tom
Date: 8/19/2024 8:36:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE a story poem that rhymes!!! It just flows so well and your story was beautiful! Sadly, this happens too often and the happy ending doesn't happen enough. Great job rhyming it all and in such an effortless way! Xo
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Date: 8/19/2024 10:23:00 AM
Thank you very much Crystol, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. We all like to hear of stories like that ending happily, but you're right often you hear of cases ending on a tragic note. Tom
Date: 8/10/2024 10:54:00 PM
Beautiful and such gut wrenching emotions with every twist and turn. Incredible rhyme throughout your piece. Such a relief with a happy ending! Good luck in the contest! Blessings and love Chantelle
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Date: 8/10/2024 11:16:00 PM
Thank you very much for your good wishes Chantelle, I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Hope you’re having a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 8/9/2024 2:01:00 PM
A great tale here Tom..How you highlight how Much better it was 40/60 years ago..(not perfect) for the world has never been such.' May you be blessed and remain strong.)
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Date: 8/9/2024 2:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe, glad you enjoyed it. I suppose every era has its ups and downs, we just have to make the best of things. Tom
Date: 8/9/2024 10:43:00 AM
Exciting drama told in poetic form. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/9/2024 10:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 8/8/2024 2:29:00 PM
Tom, I love your stories, especially the ones with happy endings. This story created tension and then your ending released it. I finally exhaled. I know how much work it is to create such wonderful rhymes. You do this so effortlessly. It is a gift to all of us who enjoy your tales. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings. Over Fork Over!
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Date: 8/8/2024 9:25:00 PM
I'm happy that you enjoyed it Sam, thank you very much. Had that idea a while back, it's tragic when a person goes missing especially when it's a small child. Haven't been so active because we've been travelling a lot this year, having my op gave me a new lease of life. Have a lovely weekend, Over Fork Over. Tom
Date: 8/8/2024 8:49:00 AM
Tom, you have a way of composing that tells a story with great emotional connection. It actually brought tears to my eyes. The way you deftly describe the pain and anticipation really hit me. How Sky's lips quivered is interesting. I've seen that in people who deal with stress. My goodness body language and emotion reveal so much and fortunately for us, you have the ability to share your perceptions of it in this beautiful poem. Kudos and smiles, sir!
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Date: 8/8/2024 10:07:00 AM
Thank you very much Duke, I happy that you enjoyed the story, had the idea a while back and finally got round to writing it. Hope that you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 8/8/2024 7:04:00 AM
All senses intact, guided by memories, brought to the area where no one would have looked. My son, I think he was 3 slipped out of a small store. We searched and searched for several minutes, feeling panicked but keeping it together, then I spotted a staircase right next to store. It said “Closed to the Public.” So I called his name and thankfully he answered. I was so relieved. I hate when parents put a leash on their kids. Strong-willed and high-maintenance, he was.
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Date: 8/8/2024 7:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim, I'm sorry to hear that it happened to you, thankfully a happy ending, kids are so inquisitive and love to explore not realising the worry they cause their parents. Tom
Date: 8/8/2024 5:49:00 AM
What a superb rescue story, Tom. Very well penned, love the nature photo too. My best regards for the contest. All the best to you and your's. :)
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Date: 8/8/2024 7:02:00 AM
Thank you very much for your good wishes Regina, much appreciated. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 8/8/2024 5:24:00 AM
Hi Tom, once again you have proved that you are a great story teller. I have been breathless till I came to the end of the story. Everything is narrated in such a plausible way that it sounds like a real rescue operation. Thanks for such vivid details and this happy ending!
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Date: 8/8/2024 7:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I'm happy you enjoyed the story, it stems from when I used to tell my daughters stories when they were little. Then I discovered poetry and combined the two. Tom
Date: 8/7/2024 6:07:00 PM
for a while there, I was breathless and so into the story...stunning piece, tom
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Date: 8/7/2024 6:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Nette, I'm happy you enjoyed the story. I get an idea and just keep going with it, I enjoy writing these epics. Tom
Date: 8/7/2024 10:36:00 AM
Despair turns to joy , A happy ending to this story, Very nicely told
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Date: 8/7/2024 11:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 8/7/2024 9:22:00 AM
Wonderful storytelling that flows so well. Great imagery no doubt. It is good to see a happy ending.
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Date: 8/7/2024 10:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, hope you are keeping well, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 8/7/2024 7:37:00 AM
Tom, this is much more than a skillfully-written poem. Your story has it ALL. Janice
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Date: 8/7/2024 8:08:00 AM
Thank you very much Janice, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 8/7/2024 6:58:00 AM
Hello Tom, I loved how you showed the power in community. You have underscored artistically the importance of not giving up, even in the face of daunting challenges, and the impact of compassion and teamwork in overcoming adversity. What an true emotional journey from despair to relief and joy. It is wonderful to see that you captured the human spirit’s resilience and capacity for empathy. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/7/2024 8:28:00 AM
Thank you very much Daniel, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. You often hear of communities coming together in times of trouble especially where a life is involved and more so a young child. Hope you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 8/7/2024 6:22:00 AM
Persistence and a hunch paid off this time Tom, sometimes it’s the difference between life and death, A wonderful story really well written and rhymed throughout, got to be a top choice for the podium in Ed’s contest, a terrific uplifting ending, cheers David
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Date: 8/7/2024 6:42:00 AM
Thank you very much David, glad you enjoyed it, having local knowledge certainly paid off. Wasn't sure if it is what he was after but once I started I kept going. Tom
Date: 8/7/2024 4:57:00 AM
You're the best short story/rhymer I've ever read, Tom. I nominate this one for poem of the week with a fave. Algorithm, bah humbug!
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2024 5:40:00 AM
I did, Tom. Time spent with family is always lovely.
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Date: 8/7/2024 5:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Lin, much appreciated, hope you had a lovely time away. Tom
Date: 8/7/2024 4:41:00 AM
Indeed Tom, I concur with the accolades below! I was glued to every line and loved the rhythm and rhyme that so poetically unfolded the story!. So glad for the happy ending, I loved reading it this morning while sipping my coffee and holding back a tear! Happy Wednesday!!
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Date: 8/7/2024 5:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike, had the idea a while back and finally got round to writing it. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Hope you too have a lovely day. Tom
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