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written for favorite teacher hosted by Karen J

 

“The teacher who is indeed wise does not bid you to enter the house of his wisdom but rather leads you to the threshold of your mind” Kahlil Gibran.
I remember being lost, like the honey-gold rays of an apricot sunset hidden behind obsidian loops of fiery thunder, when citrine stars shivered and melted into thick mists of burning rain. I was a scribbler, bleeding rants over a cracked canvas of cluttered calligraphy, oblivious to the butterfly dawn veiled beneath tangled tercets and mournful metaphors, until I found a glistening ladder to the mauve moon. There, futile verses spun in vain turned into amethyst alliterations, and my fragile fingers unfurled odes to the shimmering sky, learning what it’s like to be a poet with a digital pen. Love is more than lilacs and lavenders blooming amidst a twirl of kaleidoscopic dews; it stretches beyond the definition of a noun; it serves as a selfless savior, revealing prompts beyond superficial beams. And I, in my silent sanctuary of resonant sonatas, harmonized the purple and porcelain keys to compose a sanguine symphony of healing hydrangeas, as the Universe unfolded a gossamer silhouette of sonnets with the most exquisite elixir. Life without the melody of love and light would be a cavern of darkness, hindering my ink from seeing the silver that floats above seas of scattered grief. O beloved savior, if I were to write in pigments stolen from the dulcet essence of dazzling dialects, woven in seclusion, would the world believe you are my mentor, the roseate reason behind my rustic rhyme, the magnolia muse of my melancholic musings? Would these words be enough to praise and express? For when a poetic preacher sows herbs of hope, planting phrases of faith in cashmere credence, an orchard of orchids and luminous lilies would thrive and strive in eloquence amidst the woeful winters and somber summers… So let this poem unravel hints of tangerine truth, illustrating how crimson colors between these lyrical lines have painted my weary world in periwinkle sparkles of seamless elegance. For poetry adorned my realm with fearless feathers of freedom, to transcribe unspoken tales in turquoise and teal, flowing as seraphic synonyms of serenity.

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Date: 10/11/2024 4:42:00 PM
So Blissfully colorful and Delightful, what a Beautiful escape. I always look forward to reading your craft.
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Date: 9/23/2024 7:56:00 AM
enchanting. congratulations on your win dear poet. happy writing.
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Date: 9/23/2024 7:54:00 AM
Ink Empress I was blown away by the genius of this poem! I adore these lines most “ O beloved savior, if I were to write in pigments stolen from the dulcet essence of dazzling dialects, woven in seclusion, would the world believe you are my mentor, the roseate reason behind my rustic rhyme, the magnolia muse of my melancholic musings?” Thank you for entering my contest!
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Date: 9/22/2024 11:48:00 AM
You paint beautiful Images with your words IE. Love the quote too. Tom
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Date: 9/21/2024 4:54:00 AM
Wonderful! A favorite.
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Date: 9/20/2024 10:53:00 AM
Dearest Inky, you have captured a rainbow in your pen and bid it paint your words! Your mentor saw what you had yet to discover, Inky, as you grew within your metamorphic cocoon of metamorphosis! Each line is like seeing a masterpiece of art. Best wishes for the contest, dear friend. Sending you blessings of the rainbow!
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Date: 9/20/2024 7:38:00 AM
This is beautiful as always. So many great images I could pick out. I think this is in regards to a poetry mentor? If so, I can guess who it might be. I love your creativity in this challenge. I have only half an hour now to get dressed and get to my meeting. Will hopefully get to emails in the afternoon. At least for now I am caught up on comments. Later, gator.
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Date: 9/20/2024 3:44:00 AM
I really like the stanza that starts with, "Oh beloved Savior". I do not know if we are speaking of the same Person, but I think we are. Thanks for sharing your testimony. Sara K
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Date: 9/19/2024 8:01:00 AM
"until I found a glistening ladder to the mauve moon. There, futile verses spun in vain turned into amethyst alliterations, and my fragile fingers" -- "Light and love is indeed transformative! Life without the melody of love and light would be a cavern of darkness, hindering my ink from seeing the silver that floats above seas of scattered grief." Rapturous! The entire poem a masterful work. You get a FAV! PS: Gibran is Ok -- but your writing stirs my soul more. Blessings.
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Date: 9/19/2024 10:52:00 AM
To receive your fave is truly an honor. And to know my writing is soul stirring is truly a massive compliment! Thank you dear joe. I love gibran, and was given quote for contest. Altho right now im reading khaled hosseini. Sending you light today and always . This comment truly is uplifting
Date: 9/19/2024 7:29:00 AM
Dear Empress, what a wonderful tribute to an outstanding teacher who saw potential and released it into your soul. I love the words, bleeding rants, cluttered calligraphy, and cashmere creedence, each displaying an emotion that created you. So many great alliterations, metaphors, emjambments, caesuras, etc... In other words, please share this with your teachers, for it is an amazing poem that reflects how much someone can influence our lives. I will close with the Tangerine Truth that this is going to make her cry with joy, and it's a FAV because there are so many wonderful points to be made. - Blessings, My Dear Empress, Daniel
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Date: 9/19/2024 10:58:00 AM
Dear daniel your comments are always so uplifting and so kind and sincere and im truly honored and grateful for your generous and thoughtful response! Thank you for spreading light not just through your poetry but also through comments! Im truly blessed to have readers like you, empathetic, an empowering! Thank you again
Date: 9/19/2024 6:44:00 AM
"Life without the melody of love and light would be a cavern of darkness," How true! Reading this poem I feel I am transported to an ethereal space where beauty and poetry dwell side by side. What an amazing gift you have dear friend. I am rendered breathless reading this poem. I am sure, here there is an expression of gratitude to the teacher who helped you paint your weary world in periwinkle sparkles. For"when a poetic preacher sows herbs of hope, planting phrases of faith in cashmere credence, an orchard of orchids and luminous lilies would thrive and strive in eloquence amidst the woeful winters and somber summers…" Thus I see in you an orchard of orchids and lilies striving and thriving even in winter! Excellent....How can I leave without 'FAVing' it?
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:00:00 AM
Dear sweet valsa, do you ever not feel my words? You are always on point! And i cant ever express how grateful i am for your poetic warm presence! Thank you so much for the fave and for your kindness! Im beyond honored and grateful. Sending you light always beautiful soul
Date: 9/19/2024 5:09:00 AM
IE, talking about the creative process in such beautiful terms as you can takes me on a journey where I feel weightless. You have an ability that astounds me and transports my soul to a fragrant and colorful place. I am so very humbled to be able to read your work like this. It is a fun stretch of thought that exercises my brain and makes me smile.
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:03:00 AM
Im glad my words make your brain work more and also make you smile! Haha! I tend to do that with my metaphors because somethings i hide. While expressing! So pleased to see you today in comments! Thank you so much for being kind! Sending you light always
Date: 9/19/2024 1:46:00 AM
Life without the melody of love and light would be a cavern of darkness. This is so true, and it echoes something similar to St Paul's letter. You can write an epic, but if you write it without love and light, it's worthless. A great poem. Blessings.
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:15:00 AM
Thats such a massive compliment to sound like a saint? Thank you for being so kind i really do appreciate your kindness always
Date: 9/18/2024 10:40:00 PM
a wonderful poem, IE, with brilliant images and true literature, enjoyed yann
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:38:00 AM
Such a thoughtful comment, thank you so much for reading . Appreciate your kindness
Date: 9/18/2024 6:38:00 PM
This is a poem of free flying thoughts that are released through many happy experiences. Poetry has many facets. I floated too with these beautiful verses.
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:40:00 AM
Dear hilda your comments always make my soul warm! Thank you for being so kind always! Im truly grateful for your sincere support always! Sending you light
Date: 9/18/2024 6:17:00 PM
‘Life without the melody of love and light would be a cavern of darkness’… let there be light always. Your poetry is always uplifting and filled with life and energy. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in glorious words.
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:42:00 AM
Dear Robert, i really appreciate you taking time to visit, comment and appreciate my poems always! I hope there will always be light at your side of the world too! Thank you so very much for your poetic support!
Date: 9/18/2024 4:12:00 PM
sounds like your teacher had a profound influence on you and the way your mind approaches your writing...my favorite book is The Prophet...
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:44:00 AM
Dear frederick, you read from your heart, you can feel the depth of what i write and for that im truly grateful! And to receive your feedback truly is always an honor
Date: 9/18/2024 4:08:00 PM
I love Khalil Gibran. The prompt worked well with him. Beautiful writing, dear Ink. Power comes from you when you were powerless. <3 Light and love
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:52:00 AM
I love too! Thank you so much hope you are doing well dear sweet paige! Sending you light always
Date: 9/18/2024 2:47:00 PM
I so love your colors dear Ink, every single one of them, and the way you mesh them together as One, Love it !
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:54:00 AM
Awwn dear rose you are so sweet! Thank you so much for being so kind always! Truly
Date: 9/18/2024 2:32:00 PM
What a joy reading this wonderful write. Love your line, "So let this poem unravel hints of tangerine truth," Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:58:00 AM
Awn thank you dear paula you are always so very kind and thoughtful i appreciate your poetic presence truly
Date: 9/18/2024 1:26:00 PM
So eloquent and passionate. Stanza 5 is pure poetry and I love the message it contains, especially this line: "For when a poetic preacher sows herbs of hope, planting phrases of faith..." I'd like to think I'm one of those. Hope and faith are everything
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Date: 9/19/2024 12:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for always being so kind and generous with your support! Appreciate you pointing out also lines you enjoyed reading tomsz! Sending you light always
Date: 9/18/2024 10:26:00 AM
honey-gold rays of an apricot sunset hidden behind obsidian loops of fiery thunder,..oooo look the gloriousness of that line ….bleeding rants over a cracked canvas of cluttered calligraphy,. Aaah hello I am cracked too in the head !! So can feel… Life without the melody of love and light would be a cavern of darkness, true !!! But low key it’s so nice.. dulcet essence of dazzling dialects,.. mmm alliterations!!! illustrating how crimson colors between these lyrical lines have painted my weary world in periwinkle sparkles of seamless elegance… ooo look at that flow papi!!! I am at awwwwwwwwn!!!! turquoise and teal, flowing as seraphic synonyms of serenity. U papi r the turquoise to my teal aeee.. absolute perfection piece!!!
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Date: 9/19/2024 12:04:00 PM
Haha are you at awwwn papi! Thank you so much for reading and for leaving your thoughtful and indepth analysis of my poem in your uplifting manner as always!
Date: 9/18/2024 10:14:00 AM
A wise person is more of a sage than a teacher who guides us in the direction of fulfillment. It's an individual place for each of us, a sanctuary where we can express ourselves in what you called 'synonyms of serenity." Enlightenment unfolds there on many plains.
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Date: 9/19/2024 12:06:00 PM
Dear Lin Lane, your comment is so wise and profound! What a beautiful thing to say “ more of a sage than a teacher “ most of the teachers in my life that made a difference in a good way in my life werent from school. So that resonates. Thank you for reading too! Appreciate your thoughtful and sincere response. Sending you light
Date: 9/18/2024 10:01:00 AM
This is very good ink. I love the line" melted into thick mists of melting rain". Such vibrant and beautiful imagery.
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Date: 9/19/2024 12:08:00 PM
Awn thank you so very much dear grumpy geek goth! This is one of those poems i just let my fingers do the talking for my heart appreciate your kindness always and so two comments in a row! What do you want?!!! Chocolates? Will send them! Lolol haha
Date: 9/18/2024 9:37:00 AM
I’m amazed by your poetry ! Love it
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Date: 9/19/2024 12:08:00 PM
Im amazed by you

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