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And My Arnold Spoke Up

You bought me as your loving pet; well trained and tamed, From a cattle-fair; I was two; handsome; zestful; You did not like cats and dogs as they turned nuisance - I heard you saying to my owner when questioned... You, further, wished your pet to work for you with love, Carry you safe, far and wide, as a chauffeur does, Guard your house, like a watchman, with whistle-like cries, Entertain your wife, children and friends when needed... For a few weeks you had fed me so benignly, With silage, roughage, grains, oil seeds and rich fodders, To find a friend in you first, I felt so happy; Why this love of yours, like waning moon, diminished...? To your single bullock-cart you tied me neck-tight, Walked me to the carpenter who had made yolks, I never imagined that this wooden sculptor And the cart would become my constant task-masters...! Running recklessly carrying you to joy rides, Working tirelessly in your forest-like grain-fields, Your ration to me got shrunk to bran and water, As though to keep my breath within my skeleton...! Castration quashed my creative reproduction, Nails of my iron shoes pieced my flesh and bone, Nose-rope shut down my sense of smell absolutely, Lashes of your whip tore open my skin and veins... I had collapsed, often, drained-off my energy! You thrashed me; never thought of feeding or quenching, Your pet turned skin and bone; reaching the brink of grave. Will you find a butcher now, to cash on my death...? I'll obey; because I still have some love for you; I shall sacrifice myself; yet, with a warning; Younger breeds are mot so kind; they might hit you back; You might kick-the-bucket; if you so ill-treat them...! 26 June 2022 Personification- Pets Talking Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 7/21/2022 9:40:00 AM
Christuraj, your poem is so sad I had and have tears reading it, such cruelity. Congratulations on your win in my contest, blessings ~ Constance
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Date: 7/20/2022 7:57:00 AM
Wow! What a great personification and the poor creature. Few men know how to commune with the non-human. And they have so much to tell us! Linda
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Date: 7/2/2022 8:18:00 AM
Your story deserves a win! Congrats!
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Date: 7/1/2022 9:25:00 PM
This is such a touching story Chris. You have written it in such a way that I felt like crying..... ! The warning at the end is so striking ! Congratulations dear friend on your win.....
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Date: 7/1/2022 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Alex. You penned such an incredible poem. Blessings
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Date: 7/1/2022 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. WOW!!! What a sad write. Was it true or just a write??? Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend writing away.......................
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/1/2022 11:44:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 6/26/2022 4:15:00 PM
Such a creative piece, your personified it to the T, good luck in the contest, :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/1/2022 11:44:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 6/26/2022 1:40:00 PM
wow, this is so interesting, taking the point of view of an abused dog. It's very sad that this kind of thing happens all the time, not just to animals but even to some poor kids and grown women!!
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