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Alone In the Wall

Oh, sweet flora yesterday you were a morning surprise, from the fissure your fulfilling yellow bloom toyed in the sunlight; majestic in contrast to the city built grey concrete wall, I pass by every mundane day. Your anchor your roots in breach of nourishment, when today one’s withered head I greet on my journey. (‘Some fall on stoney ground’) I remember the story to choose the wrong path like so many folks today. Before sowing of the seed, one needs the preparation. © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Date: 3/14/2020 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations, Horsman!
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Date: 3/10/2020 8:08:00 PM
If a flower can grow and flourish under such harsh conditions, we have nothing to complain about. Wonderful poem. Have a great day.
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Date: 3/10/2020 11:56:00 AM
Harry you write beautifully and with such heartfelt warmth and meaning - - love your last two lines which sum up your poem awesomely. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/9/2020 6:28:00 PM
It could well be the humble yet _SUN-LIKE Dandelion, that often inspires poetry in me. shalom- shalom and a BIG THANKS for this one Sir Harry
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Date: 3/9/2020 4:27:00 PM
Really, really nice Harry. So important to look at where we plant our roots. Congratulations. Wonderful metaphor and vivid picture.
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Date: 3/9/2020 4:10:00 PM
I appreciate the foundation of your wisdom Poet...J.A.B.
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Date: 3/7/2020 3:47:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Harry. Oh to be hardy like that flower...
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Date: 3/7/2020 10:17:00 AM
Dear Harry, the beauty of your poem imparts inspiration and contains a social commentary deftly wrapped in the brilliant finesse of your artistry. Every poetic line shines unto the next bringing one to relish the profound wonder of your poem. Loved it and a fav! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/7/2020 9:55:00 AM
Sensitive and thoughtful observation - very pleasing, Harry.
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Date: 3/6/2020 5:05:00 PM
Inspiring story, how the flower cheers you 'every mundane day' - best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/5/2020 8:05:00 AM
Excellent just a great write and a great read.
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Date: 3/5/2020 7:01:00 AM
I like the imagery--yellow bloom in contrast to city grey wall. Great ending to your poem, harry.
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Date: 3/4/2020 11:16:00 PM
Well written Harry, nice take on the contest theme. Good luck. Tom.
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