Alone In the Wall

Oh, sweet flora
yesterday you were
a morning surprise,
from the fissure
your fulfilling yellow bloom
toyed in the sunlight; 
majestic in contrast to the
city built grey
concrete wall, I pass by
every mundane day.

Your anchor your roots
in breach of nourishment,
when today one’s withered head
I greet on my journey.
(‘Some fall on stoney ground’)
I remember the story
to choose the wrong path
like so many folks today.
Before sowing of the seed,
one needs the preparation.

 © Harry J Horsman 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Webster Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 6:43 PM
Congratulations, Horsman!
Mchattie Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 8:08 PM
If a flower can grow and flourish under such harsh conditions, we have nothing to complain about. Wonderful poem. Have a great day.
Proxenos Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 11:56 AM
Harry you write beautifully and with such heartfelt warmth and meaning - - love your last two lines which sum up your poem awesomely. Blessings, Jennifer.
Deo Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 6:28 PM
It could well be the humble yet _SUN-LIKE Dandelion, that often inspires poetry in me. shalom- shalom and a BIG THANKS for this one Sir Harry
Kauffman Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:27 PM
Really, really nice Harry. So important to look at where we plant our roots. Congratulations. Wonderful metaphor and vivid picture.
Bordner Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:10 PM
I appreciate the foundation of your wisdom Poet...J.A.B.
Manassian Avatar
March 7, 2020 at 3:47 PM
Lovely imagery, Harry. Oh to be hardy like that flower...
Ashley Avatar
March 7, 2020 at 10:17 AM
Dear Harry, the beauty of your poem imparts inspiration and contains a social commentary deftly wrapped in the brilliant finesse of your artistry. Every poetic line shines unto the next bringing one to relish the profound wonder of your poem. Loved it and a fav! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Brewer Avatar
March 7, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Sensitive and thoughtful observation - very pleasing, Harry.
Faulkner Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 5:05 PM
Inspiring story, how the flower cheers you 'every mundane day' - best of luck in the contest!
Yvonne Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 8:05 AM
Excellent just a great write and a great read.
Pandit Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 7:01 AM
I like the imagery--yellow bloom in contrast to city grey wall. Great ending to your poem, harry.
Cunningham Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 11:16 PM
Well written Harry, nice take on the contest theme. Good luck. Tom.
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