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A Magical Journey

"Dreamland can be a great place to live." By Poet
I hold three magic rocks, in my hand, Rolling them over and over and over, Leaving this reality behind, far behind. These three rocks are making music like a band, one is painted with a yellow clover, if I look closer what will I find? A magical journey I will take, before I must awake. The three magic rocks I found, were deep underground, now I am feeling spellbound. All reality is now gone, I must wake before dawn. If I don't, then I will be on my own. The magic rock band is playing loud, under the sky with just one cloud. The sun is coming up over the foothills, this night has been filled with thrills. My dear no more yellow clover tea, never before bedtime is the magical key.

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Date: 3/1/2025 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations, Paula! Your magical poem took me away. I love the "rock band!" So creative!
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Date: 2/26/2025 4:41:00 PM
Heartfelt congratulations for your contest win, Paula, with this stunningly penned poem.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2025 8:33:00 AM
Thank You for reading and for your congratulations. Glad you found my fun "A Magical Journey" write to be, stunningly penned. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/26/2025 11:11:00 AM
"2 Place" A Magical Journey~Date Written:2/13/2025~Written By Human Poet....
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Date: 2/26/2025 7:00:00 AM
You always meet the mark with these contests Paula! This is simply wonderful! Xo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2025 11:20:00 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Also thanks for saying, I always meet the mark with these contests. I try very hard. Glad you enjoyed and found my fun "A Magical Journey" write to be, simply wonderful. My imagination took over on this fun write. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away...........
Date: 2/25/2025 9:32:00 AM
Paula what a lovely view you give us of dreaming very good hope you are well Hugs Shadow
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2025 11:16:00 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. So glad you enjoyed my fun "A Magical Journey" write. My imagination took over on this fun write. Dreaming sweet or fun dreams can be fun. Hugs... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away...........
Date: 2/22/2025 7:34:00 PM
This magical journey accompanied by music must be a great experience. Be in that dreamscape as long as you can. Dear Paula, this is a lovely poem. Wish you all the Best.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/24/2025 1:09:00 PM
Thank You for reading. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, is a lovely poem. It was a ton of fun to write. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/20/2025 11:02:00 PM
Dear Paula, I admire the smooth flow of your poem. I'm shacled with rhyme. Yet reading your poem is pure elation. Best for a win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/21/2025 12:49:00 PM
Thank You for reading, for your comment and for your very kinds words. You have made my day a happy one. Glad you like my fun "A Magical Journey" write. My imagination took over on this fun write. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away...........
Date: 2/18/2025 3:04:00 PM
Paula, your poem is delightfully whimsical and entertaining. Janice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/20/2025 10:06:00 AM
Thank You for reading. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, delightfully whimsical and entertaining. That makes me very happy. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/17/2025 8:54:00 PM
I like this poem, especially the ending. Your rocks not only took you on a journey, they did it with music.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2025 8:21:00 AM
Thank You for reading, for your comment. So glad you like my fun "A Magical Journey" write. My imagination took over on this fun write. Yes, my rocks took me and the reader on a journey with music playing. Watch out for that yellow clover tea. Hahaha!!! "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away...........
Date: 2/16/2025 3:50:00 PM
Paula, I enjoyed your magical poem and dream journey, best of luck in the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2025 8:41:00 AM
Thank You for reading, for your comment and for your best of luck in the contest. So glad you enjoyed my "A Magical Journey" write. My imagination took over on this fun write. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away...........
Date: 2/15/2025 4:45:00 PM
I think I need some of that yellow clover tea! That magic rock band might do well with the tea, too. Your poem was so much fun to read,Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/16/2025 7:51:00 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you enjoyed "A Magical Journey" write. Yes, that yellow clover tea is a fun drink but watch out for it. Hahaha!!! My imagination was running on overtime on this one. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/15/2025 12:56:00 PM
A magical dreamland I wouldn't mind being trapped in, it has a music band and pretty rocks, a cloud and thrills. This really sounds like a nice place to be, no rush in waking up, Paula. ~ hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/16/2025 7:48:00 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you enjoyed "A Magical Journey" write. Yes, a fun place to dream in. I wanted to stay but I had to come back home to write about it. Hahaha!!! My imagination was running on overtime. Hugs.... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/15/2025 6:04:00 AM
i enjoy reading poems about magic, fantasy is truly essential for our brain to let go adult stress and tensions and join the world of make-believe. A fascinating story dear Paula, let your magic-dust float. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2025 7:31:00 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you enjoyed "A Magical Journey" write. Guess my imagination was running on overtime on this one. It was a ton of fun to write. Yes, stress/ tension go far away in the world of make-believe. Hugs/Blessings... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/14/2025 1:34:00 PM
Sonds like you have moved to 'Fantasy Island' there, Paula! Keep dreaming, Gershon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2025 7:26:00 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you enjoyed "A Magical Journey" write. Never know, maybe I did move "Fantasy Island." Hahaha!!!! "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/14/2025 11:10:00 AM
- Let's dream away in a magical night and live there and then, Paula :) - A lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2025 7:23:00 AM
Thank You for reading, for your comment and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, A lovely poem. Have a great weekend with hugs... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/14/2025 1:22:00 AM
What a wonderful dream. The imagery is excellent. This poem could have fit on The Beatles Magical Mystery Tour album
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/14/2025 8:00:00 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, a wonderful dream. Guess my imagination was working overtime on this one. I really enjoyed bringing it to life. Hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/13/2025 5:19:00 PM
A cute whimsical romo through fantasy world. Gotta try this one.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/14/2025 7:56:00 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, A cute whimsical romo through fantasy world. It was so much fun to write. Hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/13/2025 1:23:00 PM
Delightful! Very entertaining and amusing. Quite a skillful imagination. I splendid read. Thank you. Happy Valentine's Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2025 1:46:00 PM
Thank You for reading, for your comment and very kind words. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, Delightful! Very entertaining and amusing. My mission has been accomplished. This one was a ton of fun to write. Hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Date: 2/13/2025 11:35:00 AM
A Magical Journey~Date Written:2/13/2025~Written By Human Poet....
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