A Magical Journey

"Dreamland can be a great place to live." By Poet
I hold three magic rocks, in my hand, Rolling them over and over and over, Leaving this reality behind, far behind. These three rocks are making music like a band, one is painted with a yellow clover, if I look closer what will I find? A magical journey I will take, before I must awake. The three magic rocks I found, were deep underground, now I am feeling spellbound. All reality is now gone, I must wake before dawn. If I don't, then I will be on my own. The magic rock band is playing loud, under the sky with just one cloud. The sun is coming up over the foothills, this night has been filled with thrills. My dear no more yellow clover tea, never before bedtime is the magical key.
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Peck Avatar
March 1, 2025 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations, Paula! Your magical poem took me away. I love the "rock band!" So creative!
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 4:41 PM
Heartfelt congratulations for your contest win, Paula, with this stunningly penned poem.
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February 27, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Thank You for reading and for your congratulations. Glad you found my fun "A Magical Journey" write to be, stunningly penned. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 11:11 AM
"2 Place" A Magical Journey~Date Written:2/13/2025~Written By Human Poet....
Woods Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 7:00 AM
You always meet the mark with these contests Paula! This is simply wonderful! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Also thanks for saying, I always meet the mark with these contests. I try very hard. Glad you enjoyed and found my fun "A Magical Journey" write to be, simply wonderful. My imagination took over on this fun write. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away...........
Hamilton Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Paula what a lovely view you give us of dreaming very good hope you are well Hugs Shadow
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 11:16 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. So glad you enjoyed my fun "A Magical Journey" write. My imagination took over on this fun write. Dreaming sweet or fun dreams can be fun. Hugs... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away...........
George Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 7:34 PM
This magical journey accompanied by music must be a great experience. Be in that dreamscape as long as you can. Dear Paula, this is a lovely poem. Wish you all the Best.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 1:09 PM
Thank You for reading. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, is a lovely poem. It was a ton of fun to write. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Buhagiar Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 11:02 PM
Dear Paula, I admire the smooth flow of your poem. I'm shacled with rhyme. Yet reading your poem is pure elation. Best for a win.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 12:49 PM
Thank You for reading, for your comment and for your very kinds words. You have made my day a happy one. Glad you like my fun "A Magical Journey" write. My imagination took over on this fun write. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away...........
Canerdy Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 3:04 PM
Paula, your poem is delightfully whimsical and entertaining. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 10:06 AM
Thank You for reading. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, delightfully whimsical and entertaining. That makes me very happy. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Greenhough Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 8:54 PM
I like this poem, especially the ending. Your rocks not only took you on a journey, they did it with music.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 8:21 AM
Thank You for reading, for your comment. So glad you like my fun "A Magical Journey" write. My imagination took over on this fun write. Yes, my rocks took me and the reader on a journey with music playing. Watch out for that yellow clover tea. Hahaha!!! "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away...........
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February 16, 2025 at 3:50 PM
Paula, I enjoyed your magical poem and dream journey, best of luck in the contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Thank You for reading, for your comment and for your best of luck in the contest. So glad you enjoyed my "A Magical Journey" write. My imagination took over on this fun write. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away...........
Peck Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 4:45 PM
I think I need some of that yellow clover tea! That magic rock band might do well with the tea, too. Your poem was so much fun to read,Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 7:51 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you enjoyed "A Magical Journey" write. Yes, that yellow clover tea is a fun drink but watch out for it. Hahaha!!! My imagination was running on overtime on this one. "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Anaya Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 12:56 PM
A magical dreamland I wouldn't mind being trapped in, it has a music band and pretty rocks, a cloud and thrills. This really sounds like a nice place to be, no rush in waking up, Paula. ~ hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 7:48 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you enjoyed "A Magical Journey" write. Yes, a fun place to dream in. I wanted to stay but I had to come back home to write about it. Hahaha!!! My imagination was running on overtime. Hugs.... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
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February 15, 2025 at 6:04 AM
i enjoy reading poems about magic, fantasy is truly essential for our brain to let go adult stress and tensions and join the world of make-believe. A fascinating story dear Paula, let your magic-dust float. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 7:31 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you enjoyed "A Magical Journey" write. Guess my imagination was running on overtime on this one. It was a ton of fun to write. Yes, stress/ tension go far away in the world of make-believe. Hugs/Blessings... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Wolf Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 1:34 PM
Sonds like you have moved to 'Fantasy Island' there, Paula! Keep dreaming, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 7:26 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you enjoyed "A Magical Journey" write. Never know, maybe I did move "Fantasy Island." Hahaha!!!! "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 11:10 AM
- Let's dream away in a magical night and live there and then, Paula :) - A lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 7:23 AM
Thank You for reading, for your comment and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, A lovely poem. Have a great weekend with hugs... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Mckeithan Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 1:22 AM
What a wonderful dream. The imagery is excellent. This poem could have fit on The Beatles Magical Mystery Tour album
Goldsmith Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 8:00 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, a wonderful dream. Guess my imagination was working overtime on this one. I really enjoyed bringing it to life. Hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 5:19 PM
A cute whimsical romo through fantasy world. Gotta try this one.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Thank You for reading and for your comment. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, A cute whimsical romo through fantasy world. It was so much fun to write. Hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
DiMino Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 1:23 PM
Delightful! Very entertaining and amusing. Quite a skillful imagination. I splendid read. Thank you. Happy Valentine's Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 1:46 PM
Thank You for reading, for your comment and very kind words. Glad you found "A Magical Journey" write to be, Delightful! Very entertaining and amusing. My mission has been accomplished. This one was a ton of fun to write. Hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day... "Dreamland can be a great place to live." Write away as you dream away....................
Goldsmith Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 11:35 AM
A Magical Journey~Date Written:2/13/2025~Written By Human Poet....
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