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1/14/2020 3:01:17 AM
Images	I have uploaded an image, I cannot see where I should place the url in relation to the poem. All I see is to use it on my page. Help please
1/14/2020 5:41:41 PM
Rat race please critique	I think this is in the wrong place, I really have no critiscism, can only give you acolades. I write mainly balads so the syllable count is out to me. If it is a form that the count does not have to be consistent, all is very good.
1/14/2020 5:51:09 PM
Trapped	She is trapped in a mind that( twists and turns )....Hands are sweaty and her ( heart burns )....demons that( once were)....walls (of this castle ) Is that what you wanted Sally? edited by Warrenmbaht on 1/14/2020
1/14/2020 6:05:19 PM
Colours of Minds	Lovely poem. To me great, except for a couple of 9 syllable lines. That is being picky
1/14/2020 6:08:39 PM
My first Poem	I go along with you. You did fully infer they were not your words. Many famous sayings, we don't even know who coined them.
1/14/2020 6:18:07 PM
I'm Not a Poet	If as you say you are a new poet Janish. Could I suggest you try a 4 line stanza balad form abab. See how you go with that. Another could be enclosed rhyme. Again 4 line stanza abba. Concentrate on consitent syllable count. edited by Warrenmbaht on 1/14/2020 edited by Warrenmbaht on 1/14/2020
1/14/2020 6:23:00 PM
I'm Not a Poet	The two edits were correcting my spelling mistakes, I often strike 2 keys. Proof read post first? what is that?
10/23/2022 6:28:21 PM
Position in my poem list	Can I raise an older poem to the top of my list without deletion and re posting
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