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Lament a Tanka - See My Example

Contest Judged:  10/1/2016 9:16:00 AM
Sponsored by: Rick Parise | Send Soup Mail
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Contest Description

What to Submit?

1 original, poem on the theme of Lament / Lamentation .............ONE TANKA     OLD or NEW
Form -Tanka

lamentation~

 

mournful chanting song

of only your flowered grace

lone, I reminisce

at the edge of old green pond

sorrow flows on each ripple...

 

                      Poet ~ Rick Parise

 

 

 

elegy-


ancient river cry
below the pencil sketched hills
where once  dreams consumed

for now, twilight dying fast
writing in tears   I lament...

                         Poet- Rick Parise

 

About Tanka and Its History
 
       
by Amelia Fielden
                                                                                                   

Tanka, meaning ‘short song’, is the modern name for waka, ‘Japanese song’, the traditional form of lyric poetry which has been composed in Japan for over 1300 years.

Originally intended to be chanted aloud to musical accompaniment, waka are believed to have existed already in the oral literature of the seventh century. The earliest Japanese anthology is the mid eighth century Man’yōshū (Collection of Myriad Leaves), compiled of some 4,496 individual poems on subjects such as the beauty and evanescence of the natural world, human love, laments for the dead, and the affairs of ordinary people. Of them 4,173 are written in waka form.

The waka or tanka is an unrhymed verse form of thirty-one syllables or sound units1 most often written in one continuous unpunctuated line. Nearly all Japanese syllables consist of a single vowel, or consonant plus vowel. As the language has only five vowels, rhyming is too simple to be interesting, hence Japanese poetry does not depend on rhyme. There are no poetic stress accents, so metre based on stress is not possible, either. Instead, traditional Japanese poetry is given rhythm by writing to a pattern of 5/7/5/7/7 sub-units or sound sets, with varying breath pauses being made when read aloud. Japanese is an agglutinative language which strings together shorter elements to create long, sometimes complex, word and phrase formations. Rhythmically and semantically, 5/7/5 combines unevenness with alternation, thus providing a natural balance to offset its inherent fluidity.

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Preparing Your Entry

Submit one copy of your poem online. Format your poem. Please make your entry easy to read — no illustrations or fancy fonts. 

English Language

Poems should be in English. Poems translated from other languages are not eligible, unless you wrote both the original poem and the translation.

A Note to Poetry Contestants

You are welcome to enter this contest, whether or not you won a prize in one of my previous contests.


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