Desolation

behind dulcet verse a dazzling chant of plucked strings moonlight gleamed unseen a grimly immortal sigh on someone's desolation 09.27.16

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Joseph May

Date: 12/9/2016 4:54:00 PM

Beautiful Tanka Mon Flower...enjoyed

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/2/2016 9:13:00 AM

That hurt. Nicely penned.

Moon Flower
Date: 10/3/2016 4:33:00 AM

Thank you, Scott.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/2/2016 8:41:00 AM

This beautiful piece speaks of confusion. Isn't it? It is great that I dropped by to read your poem my friend. Congrats on your win...........A.M.

Moon Flower
Date: 10/3/2016 4:32:00 AM

Thank you, Afolabi.

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/1/2016 11:44:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Moon Flower :)

Moon Flower
Date: 10/3/2016 4:32:00 AM

Thank you, Laura.

Lu Loo

Date: 10/1/2016 9:59:00 PM

ohhhh, love this Moon Flower! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Moon Flower
Date: 10/3/2016 4:32:00 AM

Thank you, Laura.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2016 7:06:00 PM

wow, this one is DEEP. Congrats on a very nice win, Moon Flower.

Moon Flower
Date: 10/3/2016 4:31:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/1/2016 4:04:00 PM

Dark and lovely, Moon Flower. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Moon Flower
Date: 10/3/2016 4:31:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/1/2016 3:16:00 PM

Congratulations Moon Flower, wonderful piece...

Moon Flower
Date: 10/3/2016 4:30:00 AM

Thank you, Charlie.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/29/2016 7:04:00 AM

ohh, a song of despair well done, moon!..huggs

Moon Flower
Date: 10/3/2016 4:27:00 AM

Thank you, Nette.

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/27/2016 5:25:00 PM

Sad but true, Moon Flower. Great tanka!

Moon Flower
Date: 10/3/2016 4:26:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel.

Amy Jamison

Date: 9/27/2016 4:29:00 PM

This was beautifully dark!

Moon Flower
Date: 10/3/2016 4:25:00 AM

Thank you, Amy.