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Amazing you

I have been wrapped up in time, not paying attention
Feeling left out from the thrill of victory
The agony of defeat, or that honorable mention
That friendly note, that implies you get me

There is a delicate wave of give and take
It's what draws me back to this amazing place
I sometimes wonder how I can relate
Imagining your words, imagining your face

To seize life by the moment, is truly a gift
I falter in my own theory's, this is too true
But, it's you know who, who gives me a lift
And your unconditional love is amazing too

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:17:00 PM

    MITCH,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
  1. Date: 9/14/2012 3:09:00 PM

    A great poem. Keep writting.
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:33:00 PM

    A late congrats *luv* Skat
  1. Date: 7/29/2012 9:28:00 PM

    Hi Mitch;-), i'm a little late,, but I'm here to .. Congratulate all my sisters winners.. Your entry was deep and straight forward. Thank you for supporting my sisters contest.. have yourself a good night~XOX~TEX
  1. Date: 7/27/2012 8:51:00 PM

    Congrats, Mitch. Excellent. Great job. Kudos. Ralph
  1. Date: 7/27/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the "Give It To Me Straight" contest Mitch. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:14:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Mitch
  1. Date: 7/25/2012 4:11:00 AM

    Mitch super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
  1. Date: 7/16/2012 3:30:00 AM

    To my surprise it's you Mitch... xox~ how are you??? good night...pd
  1. Date: 7/14/2012 10:11:00 AM

    Happy weekend to you Mitch. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

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