Commitment Poems | Examples

Be Persuasive, Speak Of A Strong Commitment

One knows by the blinking eyes
when someone lies to hide guilt...
even words sound fake on your waking up;
I'm tired of the promises coated with lies:
times and times again I've pleaded to quit,
but obeyed your command turning into a pup!

Be persuasive, speak of a strong commitment,
stick to true words: they're a golden treasure,
don't use me only for your intimate pleasure:
passion can last as long as there's a heartbeat!  

Have you kissed another man's sensual lips?
Was he able to convince you he was better?
Damn fool, your folly existence stirs up anger: 
deceive no hearts, don't make sarcastic remarks!! 

Be persuasive, speak of a strong commitment
to build a tomorrow stronger than a fortress;
don't ask more than I am able to give when in total doubt:
I foresee days of endless joy, but also days of deep sadness!

One tastes much bitterness when sweetness is missing
from the eager mouth that wanted to delight in every truth;
it shows in the eyes, even in the emotions that are fading:
remain faithful to me, look no further, and find some worth!

No Longer Icing

two dancing silhouettes,
lurking in the shadows
fireflies spark like static in the air
a dream that bloomed
from a far-fetched delusion,
a love that demands lifelong care.

i trip on the train of her white-laced dress,
hoping some man might catch my fall.
how typical of me, to make a mess,
then run away
before time can take it all.

i envy the love i always crave.
i wish it was me
but the brick wall in my mind
won’t let me stay.

wine glasses, once sweet with cake and cheer,
lie shattered on the floor.
a dream dissolved
by the one thing I feared 
so they all slammed the door.

it’s clear i’m scared of a lifelong vow 
my trust is frayed,
and my heart’s not in it now.
so why do i still long for what i push away?

there’s no more icing on the cake.
i dropped the bouquet.


Premium Member when I said I Love you


The love I have for you is too powerful for words.

It cannot be contained by any ordinary imaginings,

Like the ones that come from the places life devours.

This moment;  Here, Now:  is yours forever.

I am in it only for you.

This is the forever I was talking about 

When I said I love you.

Premium Member From Now On

That brilliant smile upon your face, 
it lights my darkened soul. 
One gaze upon your heavenly grace 
and I lose all control. 

Your face, so graceful in its form, 
is ne’er an afterthought. 
Your eyes, my soul seem to warm, 
when in your gaze I’m caught. 

Your skin, so lovely, is soft as snow; 
I feel it as I dream 
about you, and the things I know. 
You are not as you seem. 

Your presence is so dear to me. 
I’m pained to be alone. 
But I know you’ll appear to me 
when I am on my own. 

I see you when I close my eyes. 
Your smile I see so clear. 
My rationale mystifies. 
Why should it be so Dear? 

I’ve only known you for a few short weeks, 
yet to you I feel drawn. 
I find your presence so unique 
I want you from now on.

Premium Member Mother’s Commitment

Bubbling with triumphant mirth 
then weeping midst frustration…
     heart strives to strike a balance
     between composure and chaos…
          projecting strength under grace while
          anchored by prayer not to fall…
               staying poised in the crucible of stress
               yet serenely hiding hopelessness mask…
                    vibrant soul today faces tomorrow's mysteries                    
                    expectant of miracles yon realities...
                         that’s the mother in me who champions
                         life-building commitment with: “So help me, LORD.*”

*Psalm 78:4 We will not hide them from their children, shewing to the generation to come the praises of the Lord, and his strength, and his wonderful works that he hath done.
 
May 14, 2025
Honorable Mention, "YOUR CHOICE g" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 5/15/2025


My Heart's Delight

Love's proximity surprised me,
In my own state, a gem I'd see.
Christy Ola, humble and kind,
Unique nature, beauty one of a kind.

Her heart beats not for wealth's gold,
But inner beauty, talents to behold.
She'd sacrifice time, talent, and might,
A love that's patient, loyal, shining bright.

As she approached, I asked with glee,
"Do you love me?" Her smile said yes to me.
Love's seed planted, nurturing with care,
Yielding fruits of joy, beyond compare.

Through pain and want, in luxury's sway,
You stand by me, come what may.
My love, Christy Ola, I adore,
Appreciating you, forevermore.

Premium Member Now that's brave

we took each other's hand
the two of us in love
we headed toward the rainbow
holding our breath
hoped for the best
walking blind into the future
not knowing what we'd find



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

ALL THE SAKE OF HIS HAPPINESS

She served him tea and fed him his favorite snack,
And also kept a bouquet of roses in his closet's rack,
Yet he walked away without looking at them even once,
And she felt betrayed by one of her loved ones.

Yet, one day, when he was attacked my a robber,
She ran-up to save him while his girl walked away,
As she wanted her life more than him to be longer,
And left him and ran away.

She had a few coins in her purse,
Which was the only means for her to travel back home,
Yet she ran-up to him and gave all her money to the robber to save him -
- Yes, save him from the doom,
And when the robber went - she gave him first-aid like a nurse.

She could not go home now as all her money was gone,
Yet she saved his life which was for her game-on,
Tears filled his eyes as she sat in a corner,
Begging money from others to go home,
and he did give her some of his money out of pity,
Seeing her for it-everywhere roam.

Premium Member Stay - i won't beg

i love you but you need to want to stay
sometimes love is merely not enough
i have needs too


AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Premium Member The Writing Of Poetry Is A Sacred Commitment


The Writing of Poetry
Is A Sacred Commitment - - - - - 
That's how you
have to look at it
if you're a serious Poet

You've got to take
a Vow to Poetry,
as if you're 
married to it.
In a sense you are

But it comes
with it's benefits
and moments of ecstasy,
satisfaction deep down
in your Soul

You would never
have believed that
life can be so fulfilling
So keep at it
being pious and with Faith

Premium Member The Fires of Commitment Burning


Consecration of all I do;
Mindful of whom I’m subject to.
It’s in devotion, not earning.
The fires of commitment burning.

Holy Spirit, a living flame,
Raised Christ from the dead, unrestrained.
Palpitations of heart, yearning.
The fires of commitment burning.

Born again by the same power.
Seated in heavenly bower.
With sanctification, learning;
The fires of commitment burning.

With intention to act rightly,
Bride of Christ, lamp burning brightly,
For the Son of God’s returning.
The fires of commitment burning.

Premium Member Commitment

A bond we pledge, both firm and true,
Through the trials vast and fleeting days,
To walk the path as chosen few,
A bond we pledge, both firm and true.
Through storm and calm, we still renew,
Our steadfast vows, life's tangled maze,
A bond we pledge, both firm and true,
Through the trials vast and fleeting days.

Premium Member All of Me

Take my hand 
and let the tingle that 
sent a shiver up my spine 
when our fingers first touched 
spread throughout my entire being 
until I shudder with pleasure 
in the joy of two bodies 
becoming entwined 

Take my heart 
and let the joy that 
your humor brings send me 
into fits of laughter until my eyes 
weep with happy tears that 
run down my cheeks blinding me 
from that which may 
bring us down 

Take my mind 
and sculpt it gently 
with your thoughts and let it bask 
in the kiln of love until it becomes 
as beautiful and solid 
as our journey 
together has been 
so far 

Take my soul 
and softly caress it with 
whispers that I will remember always 
as they become secret memories 
to bring a smile to my face 
and happiness within 
left to linger when 
we are apart 

Take all of me 
keep me safe and 
warm within your arms 
for without you I no longer 
have worth for anyone else 
as your love has spoilt me 
for this I will remain 
forever yours.

BENEATH THE BLOOM

At sixteen, I heard the tale of Qays the Madman.
I laughed as it was told, wondering,
How can one be so vulnerable of heart,
To let someone hold it carelessly,
Like a child clutching fragile glass?

"Grow up and see," they said,
"How life can turn meaningless
As wearing high heels for a hike."
So I grew, and the laughter faded,
A humbled fool that life had shaped.

For love became not just desire, but duty,
An orchard once wild now tended with care,
Pruned by the hands of endless giving,
Each act a vow, each harvest a prayer.

Love no longer burned—it illuminated,
Her name etched in my every breath,
Not as yearning, but as a promise kept.

And so, I loved her—not for myself,
But as one tends to the rising sun,
And bends to the earth to plant a seed,
Knowing the bloom may belong to another season.
And sometimes, that is enough.

One of a kind

Legends don't die 
and they never fade away
No longer let yesterday 
stand in your way 
Live life for today 
Live with respect 
instead of regret
Tomorrow's not given
So make today worth living
Let there be no mistaken 
Though this world is forsaken
This life is yours for the taken
Keep evil out and faith in
While history repeats again and again 
Long as we never accept defeat
We are the few the strong the elite
We will not leave you incomplete 
love and honor we will defend 
Fight the good fight until the end 
Evil and sin will never win 
Victory Is Ours once again
Legends don't die 
And they never fade away 
Their legacies are here to stay
Until the end of Days

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