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Youth

Youth is, Arrogant Aggressive Adamant But yet, Sensitive Sensual Sentimental And most of all, A fool A dreamer A worrier Full of confusion, Yet the path to precision

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/18/2013 12:03:00 AM
Well for me... I'm still very much in my youth (being 18)! I may be foolish now and then, but I don't believe I'm ever very arrogant. I really enjoyed the twist in the last couple lines... we teenagers are a big mess to tell the truth... but we're always getting closer to a vague resemblance of "functionality"... lol. Good poem!
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/18/2013 1:02:00 AM
My goodness you are only 18. But You are very deep. Thank you My dear Timothy
Date: 5/10/2013 8:46:00 AM
lol id have to agree. this is so me..
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/10/2013 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Shasha. I can see you're sweet and adorable
Date: 5/9/2013 3:36:00 PM
As Demetrios said, "yes they are" but I was an exception! I was sweet, adorable, polite and generous! LOL xoxox
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/9/2013 9:23:00 PM
Thank you, I too was very timid shy and foolish
Date: 5/9/2013 12:49:00 PM
Excellent! Yes, they are! Once we were! Thank you!
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/9/2013 9:24:00 PM
Thank You, I bet you were Love manel

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