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Your Promise

YOUR PROMISE Your promise of being Together, Filled my heart with an Optimistic breeze, Causing The lingering there fears, to Take flight Into The night of oblivion And To forever disappear! © Demetrios Trifiatis 22 APRIL 2013

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Bl Devnath

Date: 4/23/2013 11:47:00 AM

Beauty of passion adorned nicely without any doubt. Sometimes happen to many and tears of passion lingers unknowingly unexpectedly. Loved always, bl

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/22/2013 11:54:00 PM

Captivating metaphors, I enjoyed this one.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 9:35:00 AM

Good morning Demetrios, and a super wow.... never have I meet a person who did not send my heart to oblivion. if I haven't Favorited one of your poems already, this one surely impressed me the most, so far. I am struck with the imagery of all promises falling into the water. always~ Linda

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/22/2013 8:23:00 AM

I like this very much. A promise that sometimes we don't keep. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/22/2013 6:03:00 AM

I feel this way whenever I'm with my wife my friend! You have painted a beautiful and illustrious picture, one that I was able to easily visualize! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this morning! Such a fabulous piece, Great Work!!