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Your Heartbeat

Listening to your heartbeat, my darling, The whole universe at once heard singing The melody of love our Lord composed Just as the cosmos had started spinning! (C) Demetrios Trifiatis 08 October 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Michael Tor
Date: 10/8/2015 8:40:00 PM
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Demetrios This is beautiful. Incredible theme. Blessings my friend. I will not enter anymore contest Demetrios unless all poets do the judging. I'm very disappointed in the way they are run my friend. No more for me. I am happy with the critiques of my fellow poets, like yourself.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/9/2015 5:52:00 AM
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I do not enter contests myself because for me I write just to write! To enter contest is wonderful and a lot of people love taking part in contests because that way are inspired and this is fine! I believe that even without entering contests we could be inspired the same by our muse. Appreciation though of other fellow poets is a welcome experience! Write my friend and be like a bird that sings without competing, just for the joy of it!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/8/2015 12:08:00 PM
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Congratulations , Demetrios, “ The Year of the Poet II Sept. 2015” ...... The poem Your Heartbeat is very beautiful :~) 7
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/9/2015 5:52:00 AM
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Thank you so much, my beloved friend, Eve! You so kind!
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Miraj Raha
Date: 10/8/2015 8:42:00 AM
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words encapsulating the entire cosmos?Wow Sir this is brilliant.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/8/2015 10:46:00 AM
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Thank you, m friend, Miraj! You are so noble!
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Judy Konos
Date: 10/8/2015 6:29:00 AM
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So few words covering the world....
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/8/2015 7:48:00 AM
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When there is love in our hearts, words are not so important for easily are replaced with our deeds that speak volumes! Thank you, Judy!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/8/2015 3:32:00 AM
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- Beautifully dear friend ... always listen to our hearts (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/8/2015 7:50:00 AM
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Your visita a delight, dear Anne-Lise! Thank you with all my heart!

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