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Your Forget-Me-Not Smile

building a nest now with your forget-me-not smile dream bird of my mind flying too close to you now to capture those rainbow smiles +++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Contest:Tanka the Pivot Date:22nd October 2012

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2012 7:24:00 AM

Ahhh!!So romantic and expressive ...Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always appreciated..Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/27/2012 2:22:00 PM

Nice way to think of the person you love with forget me not smiles. Lovely poem Kash. love phyl

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/26/2012 8:32:00 AM

Very beautiful. I like it Your forget me not smile. Thanks for sharing. I went to the woods and found a rock, with three little words. Forget me not. Many blessings, Lucilla

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/26/2012 3:47:00 AM

A superb entry for the contest Kash. I am sure it will do well. Mahalo for your help. Blessings

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/25/2012 4:48:00 PM

AGAIN A FABULOUS EXPRESSION OF EMOTION KASH WITH AN AMAZING PIVOT LINE .. WINNING WISHES TO U ALWAYS ..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/25/2012 12:43:00 PM

trying to figure Joy's rules out have contacted her yes I will start! HUGS L & L ma

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/25/2012 12:20:00 PM

I really love this poem, Kash.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/25/2012 11:56:00 AM

Please be 1 of my five in the present giving Xmas contest Joy is running? Let me know if you can? Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/25/2012 9:26:00 AM

yoohoo... anything new form your magical quill?.. :) huggs!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/24/2012 9:28:00 AM

you are a romantic, kashi... wow, this is defining in flow and content..:) hugggs a lot, bud!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 10/24/2012 9:14:00 AM

Awww, this is just too sweet!!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/23/2012 3:26:00 PM

like this Kash, awesome poem, and love the title...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/23/2012 2:18:00 PM

well..there are all kinds of birds aye? and nests..Light & Love

Kash Poet
Date: 10/23/2012 8:42:00 PM

And all kind of smiles also........

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/23/2012 1:19:00 PM

Like a wing in flight is this verse Kash, wonderful entry for the contest!

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 10/23/2012 11:02:00 AM

Beautiful and a great entry! Your words are treasures here..."building a nest with your forget-me-not smile...". How wonderful to think of someone in such an endearing way. Ahh! Cynthia

Len Gasun

Date: 10/23/2012 8:13:00 AM

This is great and so lovely poem, Kash. This is a winner for me! Good luck always! hugs:) Leonora

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/23/2012 8:10:00 AM

Beautiful write, Kash, very nice!!jag

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 10/23/2012 7:31:00 AM

An enchanting Tanka with elegant use of metaphors. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my Tanka Unexhausted Love. -Mohammad

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2012 7:14:00 AM

Kash, ENTER it. Suzette told me in FB that even though she has left Soup, she plans to judge her contest!

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/22/2012 10:57:00 PM

I'm discovering the charms of tanka with Debbie Guzzi right now and this one of yours will definitely convince me to use it! So sweet! Thanks a lot!:) Hanitra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2012 9:59:00 PM

sad and beautiful, Kashinath. Is it for one of the contests? let me check out that thing you told me in soupmail now!

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/22/2012 9:30:00 PM

A smile to remember is always a sure way to say, 'Forget me not'! Beautiful little Rhyme, Kash. Hope you're well. Annalise

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/22/2012 4:03:00 PM

This is beautiful my friend, quite the gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly delightful poem this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2012 3:56:00 PM

:-( Kash, It is one of them days...I can't seem to find the rainbow smiles.... always...pd

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2012 3:13:00 PM

Amazing written - deep thoughts between the lines Kash. - - - ( "king of Haiku" can you be so kind and read mine - I am in the learning stage :) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)