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Your Fiery Eyes

From the bow of your fiery eyes A glance, like an arrow, was released That pierced my mesmerized heart Which was exhilarated and pleased! © Demetrios Trifiatis 02 August 2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 8/2/2015 8:59:00 PM

Fiery eyes...they say the eyes are the windows to the soul. She must be of an intense nature then. Glad to read this romantic write from you today, sire. hugs!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/3/2015 5:55:00 AM

Thank you dearest, Kim for visiting and commenting. hugs.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/2/2015 11:17:00 AM

Beautiful and so romantic...I love this

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/3/2015 5:56:00 AM

Wonderful to receive your visit, Tim. Thank you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/2/2015 8:59:00 AM

She sounds dangerous!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/3/2015 5:57:00 AM

In love, my friend, Richard, we have to take risks. Ha-ha! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/2/2015 7:24:00 AM

- Adorable and lovely written - (7) - I wish you a great Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2015 8:11:00 AM

Thank you , Anne-Lise for your lovely comment and grading! Have a great Sunday! Hugs

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/2/2015 4:43:00 AM

Herr Professor!! Ich finde dieses Gedicht ganz toll zu sein. Anytime I see "fiery eyes," "arrow," and "mesmerized" in one thought, then I know this though and its meaning shall be quite poignant and powerful. Das freut mich auch sehr!! A "7" too. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2015 4:47:00 AM

Danke sehr, mein guter freund, Gary, es freuts mich das du gefelt es. You are generous and kind. It is always great pleasure to see your comments. Thank you!