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Your deep and grey eyes I still love and seek Your palm leaf like calming looks I look for Whenever the waters are tense in the creek Extinguished in dense dark the candle flame In the field amidst the gloom I find no game I spontaneously recall your two eyes mi amor Your dancing dimples in that blooming frame Lovingly you light my lamps in darkness bleak ______________________________________________ 29/10/2016 Contest: One specific rhyme scheme : A-B-A-C-C-B-C-A Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 12/18/2016 2:02:00 PM
You are an expert in creating love poems. Cheers. Solomon Ochwo Oburu
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Date: 11/9/2016 6:53:00 AM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 6:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for liking my poem ...
Date: 11/8/2016 1:52:00 PM
beautiful Probir! thank you for being a part of my contest and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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Date: 11/9/2016 6:54:00 AM
Thank you very much for liking my poem ...
Date: 11/7/2016 2:02:00 AM
A great tribute. Good luck for the contest, Kai
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/7/2016 6:38:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind visit and nice appreciation ...
Date: 10/29/2016 12:49:00 PM
Lovely romantic poem, Probir. Well written. Barry.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/29/2016 9:09:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/29/2016 5:24:00 AM
A wonderful love poem, Probir. Good luck in contest:)
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Date: 10/29/2016 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Date: 10/29/2016 3:01:00 AM
How marvelously romantic dear, Probir! A seven
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/29/2016 6:19:00 AM
Thank you for the effusive approval ...
Date: 10/29/2016 1:40:00 AM
Beautiful! You can tell you put a lot of thought into your poetry Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/29/2016 6:21:00 AM
You too ... thought is where poems are born ... our neurons are master thinkers and weavers ... thank you ...

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