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As I saw you coming,
A smile dared walk hastily across
My lips, 
Erasing thus, in its passage, the grim 
Caused by your aching absence.

© Demetrios Trifiatis
   27 APRIL 2013

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 10:26:00 AM
    Lovely write <3 very amazing :) enjoyed so very much your beautiful expression <3 Sk

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:05:00 AM
    Beautiful poem, it raised my spirits when I got home this morning after a long night shift. I agree with all your fellow admirers below, a wonderful piece. Wonderful.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 11:15:00 PM
    This is enchantingly beautiful, dear poet. Simply wonderful. Keep smiling! :)

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 7:06:00 PM
    I saw you coming and the sun rose, bloom for me? [such a great smile!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 1:59:00 PM
    So few words to describe the joy one feels and the union of a loved one, well said Demetrios, xxx

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 4/27/2013 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you MR. The ancient Greek philosophers taught us that saying few words is what philosophy is all about! Since, I am a philosopher I have to obey! What do you think, should I put up the Canadian flag, since I am a Canadian citizen and write longer poems? Ha-Ha! oxox
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Oh .... it is beautiful, Demetrios! - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 4/27/2013 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Than you my dear! oxoxox
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 5:47:00 AM
    This is a fantastic and wondrous write my friend! You sure have enlightened my soul with this awe inspiring poem this morning! What a tremendous piece of art! It's like you have put me there waiting for my spouse from a long absence, only to see her coming, with pure delight I crack a smile, beautifully done Demetrios, wonderfully done, Great Work!!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 4/27/2013 5:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am happy my friend that I was able to express your feelings towards the person you love! Yes, that moment is a treasure of incalculable value! Thank you!