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I do not want to do adult today. Let us, please, my love, go out to play. Please, agree to no adult today. No purse, no keys, not even the car; Let us walk to the park, it is not far. Today we can be preteen baseball stars. Think of the sweet memories we will gain Should we sever responsibilities chain And live from our dormant, child-like brains. I want jeans, tennis shoes, my bright cap - I will put my hair thru the hole in back. Grab water, baseballs, our gloves and bats. We will hit, pitch, catch and we will run. We will touch the bases, one by one. I plan to be dirty when we are done. Same old, same old, makes no memory, So, come, my love, and be young with me. ... CayCay October 6, 2015

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Date: 11/11/2015 4:02:00 PM
I enjoyed this delightful write, CayCay! There are times I wish I could "not do adult". Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 11/11/2015 7:02:00 PM
This poem is totally me! All about how many days I don't want to do adult - I'm glad to know other's fantasize. Also, Kim, thank you for telling me that the poem delighted you ... CayCay
Date: 11/10/2015 12:01:00 PM
CayCay, Congrats on your favorite poem win, Love SKAT
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Date: 11/11/2015 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat! CayCay
Date: 11/10/2015 12:10:00 AM
Nice to go back in time and pretend. Love this write CayCay congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/10/2015 9:44:00 AM
Thank you, my friend - it is good to see you and time for me to check on you - I've been thinking that for days and plan to get 'around to it' today! CayCay
Date: 11/9/2015 3:31:00 PM
A wonderful message CayCay I'm sure many yearn for days like this:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/10/2015 9:43:00 AM
Thank you, Jan - what a fun day it would be! I know because I have done this and, that night, slept deep and content. Everyone on PS should go play baseball! CayCay
Date: 10/15/2015 12:59:00 AM
You were correct in that we have been thinking along the same lines, CayCay. The beauty of your work reminds me of the long days in the park checking to see if my name was in the lineup. Great line..."We will touch the bases one by one. I plan to be dirty when we are done." I can't tell you how many times I had to wash my uniform... Big 7 w plan to touch the bases, one by one
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Date: 10/15/2015 7:23:00 AM
My Father loved sports and if I had been a boy, I would have been even better (maybe?) than my all-star brother. My Father was old school about girls who had designated roles when I grew up. I grew up surrounded by the sport's world and later learned that I was darn good. I'm so glad it touched you, Dan. Love the sound of a bat hitting ... love it. Thank you, Dan ... CayCay
Date: 10/7/2015 7:05:00 PM
This brings to mind a poem I wrote called "Boy Oh Boy and a Girl. I enjoyed it very much.
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Date: 10/12/2015 7:01:00 AM
I read the poem you referenced and commented - I hope you found out. Thank you, Richard, for sharing that you enjoyed it ... CayCay
Date: 10/7/2015 5:39:00 PM
Dear CayCay You do have the heart and soul of the youthful my dear gal, loved this and I'm glad you enjoyed your gift, you see I write on many different topics and levels, I'm a writer whom dreams outside the box, that's why I stick to poetry, I don't like being locked in to one single subject matter, let me be free to ever drift amongst the vast abyss of the human imagination, lol sorry I drift again, omg, loved the feeling of this sweet poem never grow up my female peter pan ok, cheri
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Date: 10/12/2015 7:02:00 AM
Hey, Sweetie - I am so glad you enjoyed the poem. You are a gift ... CayCay
Date: 10/7/2015 1:17:00 PM
The child within us yearns to come out, either by impulsive actions or through memories. Both can be sources of joy. An invigorating feeling is transmitted through these words of yours, CayCay! // paul
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Date: 10/12/2015 7:03:00 AM
Paul - I love it when you come a-calling; you leave such enjoyable comments. Thank you ... CayCay
Date: 10/7/2015 6:38:00 AM
H CayCay. This is a great poem about the child that lives within us all and longs to get out now and then. Just a nice day of no responsibility. Sounds so good. Well, I think I'll go to the park later. Sometimes I just like to swing and see where my mind wanders. Great escape, my friend. thanks for sharing..... Robert.
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Date: 10/12/2015 7:04:00 AM
Did you enjoy the park? Have a lark? Escaping is good for the soul! Thank you for your enjoyable comments ... CayCay
Date: 10/7/2015 5:33:00 AM
A wonderful invitation to the young within us! Delightfully romantic, dear CayCay. Who would resist such a call?
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Date: 10/12/2015 7:06:00 AM
There's the face! I love seeing you here. Thank you so much for commenting ... CayCay
Date: 10/7/2015 2:29:00 AM
Great escape CayCay. Loved your write the ending was great...
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Date: 10/12/2015 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Michael - very much ... CayCay
Date: 10/6/2015 10:55:00 PM
Oh, I love the message in this poem, Cay Cay! A lovely write indeed! :)
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Date: 10/6/2015 11:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura - The thing about not being an adult today and going to play baseball really happened. It was a great day. Again, thank you for commenting ... CayCay

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