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YOU POETRY You are the breath I take in order To live And the light that enables me To see You are the melody that rhythm To my life give And the reason that I wish forever To be! © Demetrios Trifiatis 10 APRIL 2013

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/16/2013 3:55:00 AM

This is what I would love to read again....Poetry such as this...H Mykrouli

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/16/2013 3:54:00 AM

This is what I would love to read again....Poetry such as this...H Mykrouli

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/10/2013 11:00:00 PM

Kalos Erthes! Welcome back! It will be wonderful to continue reading your work here on the Soup.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/11/2013 12:06:00 AM

Kalos se vrika! Thank you for your kind words! It will be rewarding to read yours again!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/10/2013 1:43:00 PM

This is a nice dedication to POETRY... I love it.....,Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/10/2013 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Lucilla for your welcome comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2013 10:34:00 AM

- Thanks for your really lovely poem Demetrios. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/10/2013 10:46:00 AM

So nice to see you again! Thank for your good words!

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/10/2013 8:29:00 AM

This is so very beautiful, a gorgeous write my friend! I am enthralled by the splendor of this amazing poem here Demetrios! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning! What a terrific piece, Great work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/10/2013 10:28:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/10/2013 8:16:00 AM

Very touching expressions here!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/10/2013 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Drake! You very kind!