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You Pieced Me Back Together

You breathed life into my soul That was far from being whole Now it's being pieced together By your love that is forever Piece by piece it's being glued I no longer feel nude Without someone to mend my pain With you there's so much to gain The broken feeling is now gone A new emotions being born I've never experienced It's a different kind of dance That my heart is beating to There's a fire heating through Veins, muscles, and drops of blood Your love is starting to flood My whole world and wont let go There's something you need to know I will always be grateful For the caring and tasteful Way you made me see there is A need for some happiness That's been missing until you Showed me what I need to do To fill up my life with joy Now that your my special boy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/11/2013 5:26:00 PM
How romantic. Wishing you many years of happiness and joy. Thank you for sharing your lovely poem.
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Date: 11/11/2013 3:59:00 PM
Great sentiments of romantic love, robin. thanks for seeing my really old poetry. It hardly ever gets a second look!!
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Date: 11/8/2013 5:48:00 PM
I can relate to this. But it is a myth that someone else can complete us; we must complete ourselves. I have always felt incomplete as a person, and have yet to find whatever it is that will make me whole. Very interesting and good piece, Sweet Pea! :)
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