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You Or God

Do you think you are more capable than God? Do you tell God what to do? I do I do it all the time And He always catches me up on it Why is that my friend? Why do we always want God to do what we wanted? And not the other way around? Why do we think we are so special? haha We are But we are not competent Yes I said it We are not the know it all and do it all like He is We don't know zitwat about anything Yeah that's my word And that will describe you And me haha We don't know anything And we think we do Ha when do we ever learn? Probably never That's what God is there for That's why God is not listening to us That's why we are safe from our destruction - for now haha due to the grace of God So don't think and don't say We know it all Or God will let us take care of our own business and say heck with you Would God say that? Ha I hate to find out Would you? Anyway habits are hard to break As long as we know we are not the decider We are okay It's when we think we are the one Who makes and breaks That's when we get in trouble We don't make and break nothing God does And until we know that We are going to twirl our fingers and tell God what to do Lol let's see how that goes

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Date: 10/11/2014 10:30:00 AM
A powerful and serious message from you, Toquyen! God`s plans and ways should always take precedence over ours. l ALSO liked the humorous touch to it, ha ha!
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Date: 10/13/2014 7:50:00 AM
Thanks, Ndaba! Yes, if we don't, we shall see, right? haha. Love ya :)
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Date: 10/13/2014 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, Ndaba! Yes, if we don't, we shall see, right? haha. Love ya :)
Date: 9/30/2014 6:44:00 AM
- Toquyen, nothing is impossible for God - A great poem! - I wish you a nice day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/30/2014 6:58:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! Yes :) Have a great rest of the week!
Date: 9/23/2014 12:41:00 PM
Excellent and great! I fall victim of this and I hope I become better and changed in His mercies. Thanks a lot for the inspiration and thanks a zillion for the exhortation as well. A 7 definitely.
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Date: 9/23/2014 12:49:00 PM
Thanks, Funom! I am glad you enjoyed it. Love ya, my friend :)
Date: 9/23/2014 6:47:00 AM
in everything all said and done he is all forgiving in every face truly excellent write god bless
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/23/2014 1:12:00 PM
Yes, and we are grateful! Thanks, Liam :)
Date: 9/21/2014 5:57:00 AM
I do find myself sometimes telling God that I want something like maybe heal me or someone and I forget to say if it is in His will for not everything I want is in His will..Have a great day...Sara
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/21/2014 9:00:00 AM
Yes, we all do. Thanks, Sara :)
Date: 9/11/2014 6:12:00 AM
A beautiful and in-depth writing, enjoyed reading it.. Stay blessed..
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/11/2014 7:48:00 AM
Thanks, Malik. You too. Nice to meet you :)
Date: 9/10/2014 4:21:00 AM
One of the greatest sages of old, Socrates, the Greek philosopher, 469-399 BC said: " I know one thing that I know nothing!" My dearest Toquyen, you are so close to his thought and this is beautiful. I wish we all realize what you say. Essential and beautiful writing!
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/10/2014 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, Demetrios! I am glad someone thinks the same way lol. Love ya :)

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