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You Never Died

O Leader! O Savior! O Heart so Brave! Words falter to honour the path you've paved. The nation's core, now fortified with zeal, We stand to combat, with spirits of steel. No predator lurks, no harm to dread, Your flame has scattered the shadows we fled. Beneath the azure sky, the sun's bright gaze, We bask in the light of liberated days. You were the beacon, the guiding flare, The vessel that carried us through despair. Your name, a byword for valour's crest, A voice for the silenced, an ear for the oppressed. You granted wings to those who'd never flown, To brave the wastelands, to face the unknown. In your footsteps, we found our pace, Learning to rise from the dust with grace. Yet whispers claim you've departed our side, The thought alone makes the hopeful tide. Denial grips me; the news can't be true, As the masses mourn, their sorrow is in view. My pen trembles, heavy with unshed tears, Echoing the solitary cry that sears. I hold back the flood, let it inwardly weave, May it nourish the love you've left us to grieve. You are the whisper in the wind's call, The strength that rises after a fall. In the unity of one and all, O Leader, O Braveheart, you never fall. © 30/09/2014 Malik Yaseen

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Date: 10/9/2014 3:26:00 PM
I, let not my tears roll out of eyeballs Better seep in heart, nourish your love. this is the beautiful poem, words are insufficient to describe the beauty of expression of your love in this poem, i hope every pakistani may foster the same love and patriotism as you do for the leaders of our nation..stay blessed my friend.
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 10/11/2014 2:37:00 AM
Thanks Hina for your visit and for your kind words, one who deserves, should be respected and remembered... keep visiting Hina... God bless you friend.
Date: 10/7/2014 9:40:00 PM
Malik, A most heartfelt and beautiful tribute to a great Leader. Your last two lines emphasize how his memory will remain with all who cherished his life. Blessings, Connie #7
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 10/11/2014 2:35:00 AM
Many many thanks for your visit and the kind comment...
Date: 10/1/2014 4:52:00 PM
Hello Malik, Your free verse poem tribute to the very great man is very inspirational. The imagery you've employed in this write is employed quite artfully. I like that declaration you used: "Courage is synonymous with your name." Truly impressive in every respect. "7" is the highest I am allowed to give. (I would make it higher if I could.) All the best my friend . . . Cheers, Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/3/2014 3:20:00 PM
Malik . . . You're marked too as one of my "Favorites." I always enjoy your writes my friend. Do stay in touch. Cheers, Gary
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 10/3/2014 2:40:00 AM
Many many Thanks Mr. Gary for your time and for the nice words you typed for me and decorated my page....Your rating of my poem is cordially appreciated. You deserve to be my fav as you are. God bless you
Date: 10/1/2014 5:25:00 AM
Leaders like him resemble giant trees that offer us shelter in case of rain or the hot sun therefore when they are cut down we find ourselves without protection and then understand more of the magnitude of the man in question! Excellent work because it is written in all honesty and truth, Dear Malik! Another tree will grow in its place! It might take time but be certain it will for the LORD never leaves the city of his people without fortifications!
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 10/3/2014 2:36:00 AM
Well said Mr. Demetrios, your words are always differnt, i like the way you comment. Thanks for your visit and reading my tribute..God bless you.
Date: 10/1/2014 1:46:00 AM
A great tribute to him.. :) I love best your second stanza...specially the last three lines of it.. :) your poem is vivacious indeed making the title more powerful.. :)
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 10/3/2014 2:35:00 AM
Thanks Olive for your visit and the positive comment after reading my poem. It makes one glad when his /her work is being liked by the fellows around him.. Stay blessed
Date: 9/30/2014 11:44:00 PM
My friend, when we are body conscious, we have to worry about a lot but when we become soul conscious, nothing to worry about as we are keeping the same status of live and dead. Nice to read though it gives a little bit to worry. Keep writing to esteem. Thanks.
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Madhusoodanan Kizhakkepattiath
Date: 10/3/2014 11:54:00 PM
Happy to get noticed and reply.
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 10/3/2014 2:33:00 AM
Thanks Madhusodanan for stopping by and for the nice comment..
Date: 9/30/2014 5:40:00 AM
Hi Malik,I felt Your lose immensely and Your words were very captivating...I'm no expert at categories for Poetry either but this Piece might fall under free verse...I'm not certain but I would think so if it were Me.You have My Condolences Friend...Weep no more...For Heaven is as real as My Hand typing to You Friend...Pray that This Friend watches over You until it is Your time.Right now We need Your inspirations Friend.Love Sister Char
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/30/2014 5:44:00 AM
Many many thanks for your kind words Charlene, I also feel like the free verse but , i didnot know why I kept I didnot know?...,
Date: 9/30/2014 5:24:00 AM
Hi Malik, So sorry to hear about your friend and spiritual leader who passed away. My condolences to you and your family. This is a very heart felt tribute poem. Nice job. Well done. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/30/2014 5:28:00 AM
Thanks Earl for your kind words

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