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You Can'T Hurt Me

Resounding echoes awaken the child demons in the attic beckon unto him stark fear grips his Vick's laden chest shivers vibrate rusty springs of down footsteps creak closer upon loose floorboards while steamed filled pipes play taps a somber teddybear snarls causing the world to be still foolish nuns, God doesn't want to "get me" the sting of a ruler splinters a left hand blood spurts upon faces of laughter evil little boy too wicked for a mother affliction runs in the family Florence became flop because she always fell polio never whipped her ass just abused her now and then she healed with a smile Even humility has its price Jimmy Dean wore sunglasses maybe his eyes were bloodshot or maybe he was a child of an alcoholic and they became part of his attire degenerate eye disease, masturbation spattering or battering does it really matter when you can't see or understand the difference between ADD and ADHD Psych 101: Crack can be Prozac Iron gates surround a new residence protecting the innocent who peer from outside rehabilitation means refining bad habits like those on the outside who have mastered them twelve years of bars and games people play provide an education unto itself seclusion can be the deciding factor between murder or suicide self righteous judges choose life recidivism is a revolving door of vicious cycles with no engines only propellers called co-dependants or co-defendants, take your pick life repeats itself over and over only the circumstances change yet the merry-go-round stops when the flowers are arranged Why are most tombstones gray scared, afraid to die are you saved? from what, ourselves you can't hurt me Bob Shank-Nov. 30th, 2006

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 2/2/2012 7:01:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Bob. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 11:25:00 AM
One of my favorites! Alot of awakening feelings. Well done:)
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Date: 5/30/2009 7:27:00 AM
ONE OF THE MOST POWERFUL PIECES OF WRITING I HAVE EVER READ. RAW AND REAL! A MASTERPIECE!!!!! lainie
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Date: 5/26/2009 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2009 7:06:00 PM
Totally, totally, totally IDENTIFY my friend, Bob Shank and Welcome To PoetrySoup. This is a very well-deserved selection to be a feature write this week. LOVE THE TITLE and thank you so much for putting real on paper. The candy coating isn't life grand stuff gets really boring after awhile ... LOL ... but this has been a great site for me to LET IT OUT and still remain civil ... smile ...
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Date: 5/25/2009 5:21:00 PM
Bob, congrats with your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/25/2009 5:09:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/25/2009 1:15:00 PM
Reposting the winners. This was definitely one. A poetic reality show. Congrats on he refeature. Vince
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Date: 5/25/2009 10:42:00 AM
congrats on your featured poem God bless from diane
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Date: 5/25/2009 8:45:00 AM
Congrats once again as you are being honoured once again with another feature of the week. We can’t get this kind of well deserved honour else where other than poetrysoup. Keep writing, you are a great poet… Leke
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Date: 5/25/2009 12:23:00 AM
Hi Bob, congratulations of your featured poem this week. MOre power and success with your writing. Ernilando.
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Date: 5/24/2009 5:35:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Another honor for this poem. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/13/2009 5:33:00 PM
Hi Bob, A POWERFUL PIECE OF WRITING!!! Congratulations on your win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/9/2009 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Very well written poem!
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Date: 1/8/2009 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations. Such a heartwrenching piece full of raw emotion. I liked the word choice and structure. This is the kind of piece that grabs the reader and pulls at heartstrings. Great job!
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Date: 1/7/2009 4:29:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on being one of the contest winners. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/5/2009 6:44:00 PM
Congrats Bob on being chosen a winner in the September contest. Vince
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Date: 1/5/2009 2:51:00 PM
Well done! Christopher
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Date: 1/5/2009 10:40:00 AM
Absolutely astounding write here, Bob. Its #1 in my book. Should be required reading ... smile ... somewhere. Congratulations to you and I look forward to reading more of your writing.
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Date: 1/4/2009 6:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the PS contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/4/2009 2:47:00 AM
Congrats on this well deserved win! I love your poetry, you're one of my favorites, congrats! Kristin
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Date: 1/3/2009 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in final. Great work. Joyce
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Date: 11/30/2008 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 8:09:00 PM
Bob - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/19/2008 3:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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