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I try to understand What it was like For you When your world Consisted of You can't You can't Sit at the front of the bus You can't drink from that fountain You can't look that man in the eye When you speak to him It's yes sir How high sir You can't You can't You can't better your life You can't go to that school You can't be friends with that boy or girl Then you Rose Parked yourself In a front seat of a bus sat with quiet strength With an immovable spirit you said no Enough I deserve more I demand your respect You drank from freedoms fountain You exerted you Took what was Changed it to what is What is Is because of you and the many That fought not with hands but galvanized spirits The call of yes we can Yes we can You became part of the we Participants Livers of the dream Doors opened A crack Some still try to hold you back Yet you know You can Those glorious words Fought for Earned Deserved Finally Thankfully Taken Realized That chance at a better life Your piece of American Pie Your life Rooted in You Yes you Yes you can! You will You have Finally you have a home a country That belongs to you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/9/2014 5:13:00 AM
A moving tribute! "Drank from freedom's fountain" I love it!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2014 9:14:00 AM
I'm am glad!
Date: 3/9/2014 5:12:00 AM
A moving tribute! "Drank from freedom's fountain" I love it!
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Date: 3/7/2014 8:58:00 AM
Magnificent tribute to this woman. I recently talked about her with my ESL students and showed a video from youtube about her. She had quite an amazing life.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 9:20:00 AM
She is an example of the strength within quiet.
Date: 3/7/2014 8:06:00 AM
a most wise pen Rick discrimination is always a bad thing great write hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 3/6/2014 1:22:00 PM
Rick, very impressive. Your message empowers those who are within a racial tension environment.... Rightful minded you are :)s... Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2014 2:08:00 PM
Thanks Verlena, I appreciate the visit and comment.
Date: 3/6/2014 10:45:00 AM
Ok, I'm in line with everyone else: I thought this was about Rosa Parks and Civil Rights. Very strong and powerful message, Richard. Well-expressed, also. This is an excellent socially-conscious poem which is still relevant today. People are still being oppressed and persecuted for being different, and it's a sad fact. I applaud you, my friend; you captured the fight for freedom spirit most superlatively :)
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/6/2014 11:17:00 AM
Sometimes I don't always get free-verse, but this was easily understood and quite moving, indeed :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2014 10:52:00 AM
Thanks Chan, getting a positive comment from you on a non rhyming poem always means the world to me Chan. You rock buddy.
Date: 3/5/2014 7:46:00 PM
I remember that well Rick, Rosa Parks on the bus, just takes one to make a stand and see what followed, and about time too. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2014 8:26:00 PM
You as well Rich, have a good night.
Date: 3/5/2014 9:43:00 AM
WOW! WOW WOW WOW! I like! :) The power of fighting back. Standing for what you believe it......at whatever cost. Awesome, Rick!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2014 9:53:00 AM
Read Becca's blog and you will know what it's all about! Solidarity with Charmaine....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2014 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, I like the glasses!

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