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You and I One

You and I, Looked at each other, Eyes met Hands clasped Lips joined Hearts beat in unison Minds connected Souls united The “I” disappeared The “YOU” vanished The “US” appeared The “WE” was born Inseparable Undivided Whole One March forward Ours the joy Ours the happiness Ours the life Ours the destiny Ours the bliss to The end of Times! © Demetrios Trifiatis 24 October 2014

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Leon Enriquez

Date: 10/24/2014 10:50:00 PM

Dear Demetrios: Lovely write, this outpouring from the heart. Lovely read. As age catches on, we feel more and more the gratitude feelings of love in a full circle. Well done, my friend. All my best wishes, Leon.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/25/2014 1:51:00 AM

My friend, Leon, what a wonderful surprise to receive your visit. Thank you for your kind visit and comment. I also thank you for your best wishes!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/24/2014 8:37:00 PM

this for me was truly beautifully penned demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/25/2014 1:52:00 AM

Then, I truly thank you, my good friend, Liam!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/24/2014 12:06:00 PM

Very beautifully worded Demetrios! You seem so romantic, and that's so nice and tender. :)Have a great weekend my sweet friend. hugs! God bless you! love and light! xxx D.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/24/2014 12:13:00 PM

Thank you dear, Dorian for your visit and kind words. Yes, I am guilty of romanticism! Have a wonderful weekend. God bless you too. Love and light!

Anne Rutherford

Date: 10/24/2014 7:40:00 AM

Very romantic Demetrios, and so true when we are joined together in love. That is the hardest part of having to learn to say I, instead of us , we and our .I still think of we ,even though my husband of 53 years is no longer with us. Well done !Anne

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/24/2014 7:43:00 AM

Anne my dear have not seen you for very long time. I am happy you visited and happier to know you and your late husband had managed the "WE" philosophy of love! Thank you for visiting and mostly for sharing your story so younger people may be inspired!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/24/2014 3:53:00 AM

Tremendous.... Beautifully stated two hearts, two lives becoming one.....cheers

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/24/2014 5:21:00 AM

My friend, Tim, I know how sensitive you are and I understand your appreciation. I truly thank you for your visit and extremely generous comment! Only when we have suffered a lot we become as sensitive!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2014 3:49:00 AM

Oh Demetrios what a wonderful romantic sentimental poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/24/2014 5:16:00 AM

Happy am I that it has touched your tender, romantic heart, dear Jan! Thank you for your delightful comment! Hugs from me too!

BE Bailey

Date: 10/24/2014 3:00:00 AM

Beautiful poem showing such love and devotion. I enjoyed reading this and love this piece. A job well done Demetrios. Have a wonderful day and keep writing. Warm regards "B"

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/24/2014 5:13:00 AM

Welcome my new friend! Thank you for visiting me an commenting in such a lovely way! Have a wonderful day, yourself!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2014 2:48:00 AM

- The shortest touch of true love can give nourishment for a lifetime - Yet another beautiful love poems - beautifully written as always, dear Demetrios !! - A drop of true love is worth more than a whole ocean of science, I have heard :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/24/2014 5:11:00 AM

There you are my dear friend, Anne Lise! You have given the answer why in few words I say lots about love. It is because it comes from the heart and it is true. No effort to impress, just to express my feelings! Thank you so much for being there!