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Yellow Submarine

I took a dive
And saw the fish. 
A star fish too…
I made a wish.

An octopus,
A scuttling crab,
The ocean’s floor
Is never drab.

As mermaids sing
And dolphins play,
I wish this was
My holiday.

A treasure chest,
A sunken ship.
Now time to leave -
But what a trip.

I can’t believe
The things I’ve seen;
I wish I owned
This submarine.

For Heather’s Beatlemania contest

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:38:00 PM
    Congrats on you win, but why yellow! lols

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:19:00 PM
    Jack.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Many congrats Jack, sorry its a wee bit late xx

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 9:13:00 PM
    Congratulations on a great win, JMH! Well done and I'm not surprised, my friend. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 4:32:00 PM
    Love that song congrats on your win! Nicely done.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 3:34:00 PM
    jack congrats on your win, good fun poem this ...David

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:34:00 PM
    This makes me want to sing it to my grandkids!!! What a cute twist on a favorite Beatle song!!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:27:00 PM
    This was fun to read. I could hear these lyrics being sung by the Beatles! Great write and congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 1:15:00 PM
    LOL--I'm so glad someone did yellow submarine and in a perfect way!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:50:00 PM
    Jack, "Yellow Submarine" was the first song I ever heard (and I mean ever! I was probably two or three years old.) You maintained the innocent essence of the original and turned it into a fun, unique piece. Great job! Congrats on your win in my contest :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:53:00 AM
    You find lot's of treasures in the deep, I think a mermaid is waiting for you!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 5:02:00 PM
    You are so good! A definite winner in my book, my friend Jack... Best wishes for the Winners' List! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:55:00 PM
    Well Jack, I had several Beatles songs in mind for this contest including 'Yellow Submarine' but I think I shall certainly mark THAT off my list...Perfect! - Tim

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 3:43:00 PM
    Awesome write jack, good luck in the contest! Hugs

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:47:00 AM
    Write MORE!!! and thanks for taking time to see so many of my poem, dear friend.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:32:00 AM
    A beauty to read Jack, sounds like an experience on the reef. I only get to see it on the computer but your way is the best. Wonderful write! LOve, Lizzie

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:11:00 AM
    Jack, it is just fabulous, the flow is like a wave, I love it, best of luck in the contest, Constance

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 12:46:00 PM
    This made me chuckle and what a wonderful ride that would be. Hard to believe we saw the Beatles make their debut in the sixties. Look at the music they made. CLASSIC. Awesome write. love phyl

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:52:00 AM
    What a cute and clever way to do the Beatlemania contest. I really enjoyed this one a lot, Jack. Wanted to thank you for taking the time to catch up with so many of my recent poems. I know some were a bit long. Yours are always so succinct, just like i love poetry to be.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:20:00 PM
    Awesome as Donna says ;}