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Yellow Leaves

Yellow leaves falling into the lake. Its surface caressed by the breeze. My thoughts hop from leaf to leaf cleaving the breeze up to the Sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/23/2014 7:04:00 PM
Masterful Tanka!
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Date: 8/8/2014 7:46:00 PM
Awesome!! You should do more tanka for sure.
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Date: 8/21/2013 4:25:00 PM
stunningly done. so lovely Shadow x smile
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Date: 3/18/2013 2:00:00 PM
Nicely done on this tanka. love phyl
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Date: 3/12/2013 1:39:00 PM
Nice...I get a clear image and thought from this one.
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