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Yellow leaves

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Yellow leaves

Yellow leaves falling
into the lake. Its surface
caressed by the breeze.

My thoughts hop from leaf to leaf 
cleaving the breeze up to the Sun.

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  1. Date: 8/23/2014 7:04:00 PM
    Masterful Tanka!

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 7:46:00 PM
    Awesome!! You should do more tanka for sure.

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 4:25:00 PM
    stunningly done. so lovely Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:00:00 PM
    Nicely done on this tanka. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 1:39:00 PM
    Nice...I get a clear image and thought from this one.