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Daffodils nodding Their faces shy and reserved Such tender beauty Soft butter moonlight tryst Our innocence lost

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick

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  1. Date: 5/22/2013 7:14:00 AM
    Lovely BG. Many congrats for this great win.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 6:14:00 AM
    Congrats on your win! I just remember Wordsworth's "Daffodils"- what a beauty!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 8:55:00 AM
    breathtaking, congrats on your win Barbara

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Very creative and expressive winning work..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Congratulations Barbara on your well deserve win. A beautiful and delicate Tanka. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 2:17:00 AM
    Congratulations, Barbara. Such a beautiful piece deserved it.-Red

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:09:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win Barbara, well done xx

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 12:45:00 AM
    barbara, it was that soft butter moonlight that did it for me. I just LOVE that image! and yellow is so sweet. Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:14:00 PM
    awesome ....congrats on your win

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:00:00 PM
    this is an awesome choice of yellow, for Andrea... Tanka me a color. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:14:00 PM
    oh.......I love this, Barbara! That last line.......those daffodils lost their shyness?? :) So pretty! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 6:11:00 PM
    Barbara, perfectly phrased, kudos on your win

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 6:56:00 AM
    Thanks for that turn around the dance floor. How better to lose innocence, eh? Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 4:08:00 PM
    Seems a very nice Tanka to me, Barbara. But Blue was my first (I'm sure it must've showed).-Red

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 11:59:00 AM
    The tenderness of a noble soul revealed! Fantastic! Thank you!

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 10:45:00 AM
    so poetic! i really like this...