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Writer's Block

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Writer's Block

Words flowed onto page after page from my pen,
but then you smiled and had me sit, read, and listen.
Your words entangled themselves around my heart
and although I didn't know it that's when the trouble had to start.
In front of me lay a blank paper waiting for my pen to write,
but the words wouldn't fit together. None of them seemed right.
So to the source of my problem, I don't know what to say.
I can't think of the words that would make this more true. Your amazing in every way.
You make me blush, you make me smile,
and I would really mind writer's block if you would stay a while.

*To the guy who's breath I take away while leaving me with nothing left to say.

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  1. Date: 5/28/2010 6:28:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 11:33:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Destiny. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 1:41:00 AM
    Smile! I really like this dear and, it seems that there are some wonderfully gifted and talented and creative writers being born amid these walls at soup here as of late! Smile, splendid read dear lady and, a very lovely impression! Great Job! Much Warmth To You & Your Loves, John! ~ "Bye":)

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 12:05:00 AM
    nice way to express your feelings on your certain someone, enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 10:24:00 PM
    Very nice. He can't breathe and you can't talk - sounds like a fun The poem is beatiful and well written. Nice job. Joe

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 9:44:00 PM
    I love this, Destiny. Having a fella around can be quite a distraction. It sounds like you are quite smitten and I'm happy for you! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 8:36:00 PM
    Cool write Destiny and luv can do strange things one way or the other... very innovative and creative too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..